Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки, а также нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более связные предложения с правильным использованием предлогов и избегать излишних повторов.

例: I really enjoy geography because it allows me to explore different countries and understand global phenomena. For example, learning about the climates of Europe and Asia helps me appreciate the diversity of our planet.

提案: Ответ немного нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения более ясно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: I believe geography is useful, especially for understanding climates and cultures. However, its usefulness depends on your profession; for example, it might be less relevant in some jobs.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные формулировки и избегать повторов.

例: Yes, I have studied geography for about four years as part of my studies. I even participated in a city championship, which helped me realize my potential in this subject.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит повторы и нечеткие конструкции. Следует использовать более связные и грамматически правильные предложения.

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because it's not my interest. Instead, I dream of becoming a pilot, and geography is important for understanding the world while flying.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется строить предложения более плавно и использовать связующие слова.

例: I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries in the future, especially since I want to study abroad in Europe or the USA. Experiencing the culture firsthand will be more meaningful than just reading about it.

× Like exploring about the Earth, about the whole world, about like Europe a Asia, the weather.

✓ Like exploring the Earth, the whole world, Europe and Asia, and the weather.

The phrase 'exploring about' is incorrect because 'explore' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'Europe a Asia' seems to be a typo and should be 'Europe and Asia'. The sentence is corrected by removing 'about' after 'exploring' and fixing the conjunction.

× it depends what you work, what's your speciality in your work?

✓ it depends on what you work at, what's your speciality in your work?

The verb 'depends' requires the preposition 'on' to connect to the object. Also, 'work' as a verb usually requires a preposition like 'at' when referring to a place or field of work.

× So it's not really useful if you work in other works.

✓ So it's not really useful if you work in other jobs.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used here. The correct plural noun referring to different types of employment is 'jobs'.

× So we have learned geography for like 4 years and I even got to cities championship in geography.

✓ So we have learned geography for about 4 years and I even got to the cities championship in geography.

The phrase 'got to cities championship' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'cities championship'. Also, 'like' is informal and 'about' is more appropriate here.

× I even got to cities championship in geography.

✓ I even got to the city championship in geography.

The phrase 'cities championship' should be singular 'city championship' if referring to a specific event. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'city championship'.

× I didn't get a high place there but I guess I I have a big potential in geography.

✓ I didn't get a high place there but I guess I have great potential in geography.

The phrase 'a big potential' is incorrect because 'potential' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typo.

× Definitely not because I'm not interested in being teacher, not in geography.

✓ Definitely not because I'm not interested in being a teacher, not in geography.

The noun 'teacher' requires the indefinite article 'a' when used in this context.

× But I used to dream about being a pilot, so geography is really important.

✓ But I used to dream of being a pilot, so geography is really important.

The correct preposition after 'dream' when referring to aspirations is 'of', not 'about'.

× The flying over the whole world is really interesting for me, so I wanna be, so I want to be a pilot.

✓ Flying over the whole world is really interesting for me, so I want to be a pilot.

The definite article 'The' before 'flying' is unnecessary here. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech.

× I think I will in the future, especially because of I wanna, I want to study in other countries like Europe countries or USA.

✓ I think I will in the future, especially because I want to study in other countries like European countries or the USA.

The phrase 'because of I wanna' is incorrect; it should be 'because I want to'. Also, 'Europe countries' should be 'European countries' and 'USA' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× So when I fly over there, I have to and I'm interested to learn the culture and not just study in books.

✓ So when I fly over there, I have to and I'm interested in learning the culture and not just studying from books.

The verb 'interested' is followed by the preposition 'in' and the gerund form of the verb. Also, 'study in books' is better expressed as 'studying from books'.