Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I have liked geography since middle school because it helps me understand how different countries are connected. For example, I enjoy watching documentaries about natural events like earthquakes and volcanoes.

提案: 回答内容有些重复且最后一句不完整，建议回答时注意完整表达，并使用更多具体例子和连接词来增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand environmental issues and climate change. Moreover, it is important for navigation and traveling, such as when I plan trips to new places.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但最后一句表达有些重复和语法错误，建议注意句子结构的准确性和简洁性。

例: Yes, I have studied geography since middle school. I am fascinated by the causes of natural phenomena like earthquakes and climate patterns. I also did well in this subject and was once the top scorer in my class.

提案: 回答表达清晰且内容具体，但句子较长，建议适当拆分句子并使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Maybe not, although I find geography interesting. I am more interested and talented in history, so I did not choose geography as an optional course in high school. Teaching geography requires passion and extensive knowledge, which I may not have.

提案: 回答内容丰富且表达较好，但“appeals me”用词不当，建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子衔接。

例: Yes, definitely. I am interested in learning about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand global connections and appreciate different cultures and histories. Moreover, their landscapes and attractions are fascinating and worth exploring.

× I have learned this subject since my middle school.

✓ I have been learning this subject since my middle school.

句中使用了“since”，表示从过去某时开始一直持续到现在，应该用现在完成进行时态，而不是一般现在完成时。

× What fascinates me most are the reasons behind the geographical phenomenon such as earthquakes and climate patterns.

✓ What fascinates me most are the reasons behind the geographical phenomena such as earthquakes and climate patterns.

phenomenon是单数，phenomena是复数。句中提到多个现象，应使用复数形式phenomena。

× I remember clearly that I performed well in this subject and was one was once the top scorer.

✓ I remember clearly that I performed well in this subject and was once the top scorer.

句中“was one was once”重复，应删除多余的“was one”。

× It can provide some common sense about something like environmental issues and climate change.

✓ It can provide some common sense about things like environmental issues and climate change.

“something like”用法不当，表达“诸如……之类的事物”应使用“things like”。

× It appeals me because it is helpful for me to understand the global connections and appreciate different cultures and histories.

✓ It appeals to me because it is helpful for me to understand the global connections and appreciate different cultures and histories.

动词appeal后应接介词to，构成短语“appeal to sb.”，表示“吸引某人”。