Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by adding linking words and more specific examples to enrich your response.

例: I find geography quite fascinating because it helps me understand the world better. For example, it teaches me about different cultures and natural environments, which broadens my perspective.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: Yes, geography is very useful because it provides knowledge about global issues, such as climate change and population distribution, which helps us understand the world better.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Improve sentence structure and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with verb tenses and article usage.

例: Yes, I learned geography in secondary and high school. I found it very interesting because it helped me understand different places, which is why I really want to travel around the world.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use correct prepositions and articles, and avoid repeating the same words. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I do because I like geography and enjoy teaching others about it. Moreover, communicating with people about geography is both interesting and meaningful to me.

提案: Your answer is good but missing a verb in the first sentence. Also, adding linking words can improve coherence. Pay attention to sentence completeness and grammar.

例: Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries because understanding different landscapes, climates, and natural resources helps me appreciate the diversity of our world.

× Yes, of course, absolutely it it is useful because geography give us knowledge about the global and we will know more about the world because of the geography.

✓ Yes, of course, absolutely it is useful because geography gives us knowledge about the globe and we will know more about the world because of geography.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'geography'. Also, 'global' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'globe'. The repeated 'it' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Yes, I learn geography in secondary school and high school, and I think geography is very interesting subject and I like this subject.

✓ Yes, I learned geography in secondary school and high school, and I think geography is a very interesting subject and I like this subject.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to correctly indicate a completed action in the past. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very interesting subject' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do because I like the geography and I also like to teach other the knowledge about the geography and I think communicating with other about geography is very interesting and meaningful.

✓ Yes, I do because I like geography and I also like to teach others knowledge about geography and I think communicating with others about geography is very interesting and meaningful.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'geography' when speaking generally. Also, 'other' should be 'others' to correctly refer to other people, and 'the knowledge' should be 'knowledge' without 'the' as it is uncountable here.

× Yes, I definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries.

✓ Yes, I am definitely interested in learning more about the geography of other countries.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to link the subject 'I' with the adjective 'interested'. Without 'am', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.