Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复表达，且内容较为笼统。建议简化句子结构，避免口头语，增加具体细节，使表达更连贯。

例: I don't like geography because I find it a bit boring. For example, when I was in senior high school, the lessons were full of complex concepts that made me feel tired and sleepy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且缺少具体细节。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，增加具体例子来支持观点。

例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand different countries and their environments. For instance, learning about climate and culture can broaden our knowledge about the world.

提案: 回答结构不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明学习内容和感受。

例: Yes, I studied geography in senior high school. We learned basic concepts and technologies related to the subject, and we had many exams to assess our understanding.

提案: 表达不够正式且语法错误较多，内容重复且不够具体。建议使用正式表达，明确说明原因，并避免重复。

例: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I get frustrated when I can't solve problems, and I find the subject uninteresting.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，内容较为简单。建议使用更准确的表达，增加具体细节，使回答更丰富。

例: If I stay in my hometown, I probably won't study other countries' geography because I find it boring. However, if I travel abroad, I would like to learn about the local culture, climate, and geography to better understand the place.

× For me, I don't like geography because I'm thinking the geography knowledge is little bit boring and umm For example when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always feel tired and sleepy when the teacher speaking so many concepts and the knowledge.

✓ For me, I don't like geography because I think the geography knowledge is a little bit boring. For example, when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always felt tired and sleepy when the teacher was speaking so many concepts and the knowledge.

这里“I'm thinking”应改为一般现在时“I think”，因为表达的是一般事实或观点；“the teacher speaking”应改为“the teacher was speaking”，因为描述过去进行的动作，需要过去进行时。

× For me, I don't like geography because I'm thinking the geography knowledge is little bit boring and umm For example when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always feel tired and sleepy when the teacher speaking so many concepts and the knowledge.

✓ For me, I don't like geography because I think the geography knowledge is a little bit boring. For example, when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always felt tired and sleepy when the teacher was speaking so many concepts and knowledge.

“the knowledge”前不需要加“the”，且“knowledge”是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× For me, I don't like geography because I'm thinking the geography knowledge is little bit boring and umm For example when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always feel tired and sleepy when the teacher speaking so many concepts and the knowledge.

✓ For me, I don't like geography because I think the geography knowledge is a little bit boring. For example, when I was a Senior High School student, during the class I always felt tired and sleepy when the teacher was speaking so many concepts and knowledge.

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态，如“feel”应改为“felt”。

× Definitely yes, because in my hometown, the geography is one of the main subjects in our daily schedule. So it included so many concepts and knowledge is about, uh, age country or age states.

✓ Definitely yes, because in my hometown, geography is one of the main subjects in our daily schedule. So it includes many concepts and knowledge about, uh, each country or each state.

“the geography”中“the”不必要且不正确，应去掉；“included”应为现在时“includes”，因为描述的是现在的情况；“so many concepts and knowledge is about”结构不正确，应改为“many concepts and knowledge about”；“age country or age states”应为“each country or each state”。

× Definitely yes, because in my hometown, the geography is one of the main subjects in our daily schedule. So it included so many concepts and knowledge is about, uh, age country or age states.

✓ Definitely yes, because in my hometown, geography is one of the main subjects in our daily schedule. So it includes many concepts and knowledge about, uh, each country or each state.

“included”应改为“includes”，因为描述现在的事实；“is about”应改为“about”，去掉多余的“is”。

× Yes, definitely, cause in my hometown everyone needed to learn the geography when during our Senior High School.

✓ Yes, definitely, because in my hometown everyone needed to learn geography during our Senior High School.

“cause”应改为正式的“because”；“the geography”中“the”不必要；“when during”重复，应去掉“when”。

× Yes, definitely, cause in my hometown everyone needed to learn the geography when during our Senior High School.

✓ Yes, definitely, because in my hometown everyone needed to learn geography during our Senior High School.

“when during”重复使用，语法错误，应只用“during”。

× So at that time we need to learn so many basic technology and concepts.

✓ So at that time we needed to learn many basic technologies and concepts.

“technology”应使用复数形式“technologies”，因为前面有“many”；动词时态应与上下文一致，改为过去时“needed”。

× So at that time we need to learn so many basic technology and concepts.

✓ So at that time we needed to learn many basic technologies and concepts.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态“needed”。

× Then we have so many exams to check our learning.

✓ Then we had many exams to check our learning.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态“had”。

× I don't wanna be a geography teacher because only one hand I'm really angry and upset when I face several problems that I cannot solve it.

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher because on one hand I'm really angry and upset when I face several problems that I cannot solve.

“wanna”是口语缩写，正式写作应为“want to”；“only one hand”应为“on one hand”；“cannot solve it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× I don't wanna be a geography teacher because only one hand I'm really angry and upset when I face several problems that I cannot solve it. On the other hand, the geography is boring for me.

✓ I don't want to be a geography teacher because on one hand I'm really angry and upset when I face several problems that I cannot solve. On the other hand, geography is boring for me.

“only one hand”应改为“on one hand”；“the geography”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× On the other hand, the geography is boring for me.

✓ On the other hand, geography is boring for me.

“geography”作为学科名词前不加冠词“the”。

× If I still in my hometown, definitely no because it's boring.

✓ If I am still in my hometown, definitely no because it's boring.

条件句中缺少动词“am”，应补充完整。

× If I still in my hometown, definitely no because it's boring.

✓ If I am still in my hometown, definitely no because it's boring.

条件句中缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构错误。

× But if I go abroad to enjoy the local culture and the local climate, I prefer to learn more the other countries jobs, geographic knowledge and concept.

✓ But if I go abroad to enjoy the local culture and the local climate, I prefer to learn more about other countries' jobs, geographic knowledge, and concepts.

“learn more the other countries jobs”缺少介词“about”，且“countries jobs”应为“countries' jobs”；“concept”应为复数“concepts”。