Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: Yes, I like geography very much because it helps me understand maps and different regions of the world.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear reason why geography is useful, and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, geography is useful because it helps us understand landscapes and how to use natural resources, such as farming and building structures.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more specific about what you learned. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I studied geography in elementary school, and I enjoyed learning about different countries and their cultures.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid irrelevant information and use correct grammar.

例: Yes, I would like to be a geography teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge about the world and helping others learn.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I plan to learn more about maps of other countries because I love traveling abroad, and understanding maps helps me navigate better.

× I enjoy to learn about the map the of the group.

✓ I enjoy learning about the map of the group.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive 'to learn'. Also, 'the map the of the group' is incorrect word order; it should be 'the map of the group'.

× Yes, it it is because the geography allow us to know about the landscape and how do we use the benefits from them such as how to like and build corn stock the things.

✓ Yes, it is because geography allows us to know about the landscape and how we use the benefits from it, such as how to plant and build corn stocks and other things.

The subject 'geography' is singular and requires the verb 'allows' in third person singular form. Also, 'how do we use' should be 'how we use' in this context. The phrase 'like and build corn stock the things' is unclear and corrected to 'plant and build corn stocks and other things' for clarity.

× The geography allow me to learn a lot of the incredible group.

✓ Geography allows me to learn a lot about the incredible group.

'Geography' is singular and requires the verb 'allows' in third person singular. Also, 'a lot of the incredible group' is awkward; 'a lot about the incredible group' is more natural.

× Yes, I used to be 1 tutor T-shirts in the part of the social, including in geographic area.

✓ Yes, I used to be a tutor in the social studies part, including geography.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors such as '1 tutor T-shirts' which is nonsensical. It is corrected to a clear sentence indicating the student was a tutor in social studies including geography.

× Yes I will but in term of the map learning because I love to travel to abroad so I have to read the map sometimes.

✓ Yes, I will, but in terms of map learning because I love to travel abroad, so I have to read maps sometimes.

The phrase 'in term of the map learning' should be 'in terms of map learning'. Also, 'travel to abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'travel abroad'. 'Read the map sometimes' is better as 'read maps sometimes' for generality.