Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I like geography because it helps me understand different cultures and how the Earth changes. This knowledge is useful in daily life, especially when I travel.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举具体例子支持。

例: Yes, geography is useful because it explains things like why cities are warmer than the countryside. This helps us understand our environment better.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地回答问题。

例: Yes, I have studied geography for about nine years since primary school because it was an important subject in my classes.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达自己的职业偏好。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. I prefer subjects like math and physics, so I would rather become a math teacher.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用连贯的句子，清晰表达学习其他国家地理的原因和好处。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand the world better. This knowledge is useful for traveling and having conversations with people from different places.

× Yes, I definitely like geography because geographies have a wide range of knowledge containing the cultures and the earth's movement and so ONS.

✓ Yes, I definitely like geography because geography has a wide range of knowledge containing cultures and the earth's movements and so on.

“Geographies”应为不可数名词“geography”，且谓语动词应与单数主语一致，故用“has”。“the cultures”中的“the”可去掉，且“earth's movement”应为复数“earth's movements”。

× All of this knowledge have can take convenience to our life, such as in travel.

✓ All of this knowledge can bring convenience to our life, such as in travel.

“knowledge”是不可数名词，谓语动词应为单数形式，且“have can”结构错误，应改为“can”。“take convenience”表达不当，应改为“bring convenience”。

× Yes, definitely, because geography cover some knowledge can save our daily life problems, For example, why the city's temperature are higher in countryside, this question can be served by the geographies and the sentence in tribute and.

✓ Yes, definitely, because geography covers some knowledge that can solve our daily life problems. For example, why the city's temperature is higher than in the countryside; this question can be answered by geography and related sentences.

“geography”作为单数，谓语动词应为“covers”。“knowledge”不可数，需加“that”引导定语从句。温度是单数，谓语用“is”。“are higher in countryside”应为“is higher than in the countryside”。“served by the geographies and the sentence in tribute and”表达不清，改为“answered by geography and related sentences”。

× Yes, I learning geography this subject about the nine years because when I was primary school the geography is the complexary cost for our class.

✓ Yes, I have been learning geography for about nine years because when I was in primary school, geography was a compulsory subject for our class.

“I learning”应为现在完成进行时“I have been learning”。“about the nine years”应为“for about nine years”。“the geography is the complexary cost”表达错误，应为“geography was a compulsory subject”。

× So in that case we have to study this subject.

✓ So in that case, we had to study this subject.

根据上下文，过去时态更合适，且句中应加逗号以分隔状语。

× No, although I study geography for nine years, but in my opinion I prefer to learn some statistical knowledge such as the mass or physicals.

✓ No, although I have studied geography for nine years, in my opinion, I prefer to learn some statistical knowledge such as mass or physics.

“although”与“but”不能同时使用，应去掉“but”。“study”应为现在完成时“have studied”。“mass or physicals”应为“mass or physics”。

× So comparing the geography teacher, I will choose become a math teacher.

✓ So compared to being a geography teacher, I would choose to become a math teacher.

“comparing the geography teacher”结构不正确，应为“compared to being a geography teacher”。“choose become”应为“choose to become”。

× Yes, definitely because studying the geography of other countries can take me a lot of advantages.

✓ Yes, definitely because studying the geography of other countries can bring me a lot of advantages.

“take me a lot of advantages”表达不当，应为“bring me a lot of advantages”。

× Firstly it can made me learn more things in the world.

✓ Firstly, it can make me learn more things about the world.

“can made”错误，应为“can make”。“learn more things in the world”应为“learn more things about the world”。

× This can take convenience for my traveling and also some daily talk about at the same time learning the other.

✓ This can bring convenience to my traveling and also help with daily conversations while learning about others at the same time.

“take convenience”应为“bring convenience”。“some daily talk about”表达不完整，应为“help with daily conversations”。“learning the other”不明确，改为“learning about others”。