Geography— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I don't like geography because I find it quite abstract and difficult. For example, I once got a low score in an exam, which made me feel it's a challenging subject for me.

提案: 回答内容较简单，表达不够连贯，存在语法错误。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并提供更具体的例子。

例: Absolutely, geography is very useful because it helps us navigate new places. For instance, when traveling, understanding basic geography allows us to read maps and find directions easily.

提案: 回答结构基本合理，但用词和语法有误，如“attitude”应为“latitude”。建议注意词汇准确性，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have studied geography since secondary school. I learned about concepts like longitude and latitude, which helped me understand how to read maps effectively.

提案: 回答表达不清且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免复杂句式错误。

例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not good at the subject. Also, I don't think I can teach it well to students.

提案: 回答较好，但“geographies”用词不当，建议使用单数形式并丰富细节。

例: Yes, definitely. I plan to learn more about the geography of Germany since I will study for my master's degree there. This will help me understand the country better.

× Is therefore I.

✓ Therefore, I think so.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致表达不清。应调整语序，使句子完整通顺。

× I think it's a useful tool for us to navigation.

✓ I think it's a useful tool for us to navigate.

动词后不应直接接名词navigation，正确用法是动词不定式to + 动词原形navigate。

× when you travel to some new place, you have to recognize it's basic geography it.

✓ when you travel to some new place, you have to recognize its basic geography.

'it's'是'it is'的缩写，错误地用作所有格，正确应为'its'。句尾多余的'it'应删除。

× I knew the knowledge about longitude and attitude, and it equipped me with the ability to recognize the maps.

✓ I knew the knowledge about longitude and latitude, and it equipped me with the ability to read maps.

'attitude'应为'latitude'（纬度），词汇错误。'recognize the maps'表达不自然，改为'read maps'更合适。

× No, I didn't want to be a geography teacher.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher.

回答当前意愿，应用一般现在时，过去时'didn't want'不符合语境。

× I propose I don't have the ability to impact well knowledge to the students.

✓ I think I don't have the ability to impart knowledge well to the students.

'propose'用法错误，应为'think'或'believe'。'impact'用错，正确动词为'impart'（传授）。'well'位置调整以修饰动词。

× Secondly, I think it's a hard word to me.

✓ Secondly, I think it's hard work for me.

'word'应为'work'，词汇错误。'hard work'表示艰苦的工作。

× I would not.

✓ I would not want to.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清。应补充完整表达意愿。

× I think I will learn more about the geographies of Germany because I plan to study my master degree there.

✓ I think I will learn more about the geography of Germany because I plan to study my master's degree there.

'geographies'应为单数形式'geography'，表示一国的地理。'master degree'应为'master's degree'，所有格形式。