Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คุณควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'I am actually interested in the meaning of flowers' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'learn studied' นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น

例: I am actually interested in the meaning of flowers, so I have studied a lot about the symbolism of sunflowers. I think they are very attractive and represent happiness.

提案: ควรใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'most women love flowers' และ 'my close friend Anna really loves flowers' รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และลื่นไหล

例: I think most women love flowers, especially when they receive them from their loved ones. For example, my close friend Anna really loves flowers.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน เช่น 'There are some flowers where I live, but not many' และอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับสถานที่อย่างชัดเจน รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่สมบูรณ์หรือไม่ชัดเจน

例: There are some flowers where I live, but not many. Since I live in the city center, we don't have gardens, but there are some local flowers growing on the pavements.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I would definitely take photos if I found flowers on my way' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนหรือผิดไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'don't doesn't' รวมถึงควรจบประโยคให้สมบูรณ์

例: I would definitely take photos if I found flowers on my way. However, as I mentioned before, Thailand doesn't really have flowers decorating the roads.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และถูกต้อง เช่น 'There aren't any specific customs about sending flowers, but we usually send them during meaningful events like graduations, weddings, or to congratulate someone on a new job' และหลีกเลี่ยงการจบประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์

例: There aren't any specific customs about sending flowers, but we usually send them during meaningful events like graduations, weddings, or to congratulate someone on a new job.

× I actually into the meaning of flowers, so I have learn studied a lot about meaning of sunflower.

✓ I am actually into the meaning of flowers, so I have learned a lot about the meaning of sunflowers.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present continuous tense 'I am into'. Also, 'learn studied' is incorrect; it should be 'have learned' to indicate present perfect tense. Additionally, 'meaning of sunflower' should be 'meaning of sunflowers' to match plural usage.

× I actually into the meaning of flowers, so I have learn studied a lot about meaning of sunflower.

✓ I am actually into the meaning of flowers, so I have learned a lot about the meaning of sunflowers.

The noun 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' because it refers to the general meaning of the flower type, not a single sunflower.

× I think most of the women love flowers, especially getting them from their loved one.

✓ I think most of the women love flowers, especially getting them from their loved ones.

'Loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to agree with 'most of the women' who have multiple loved ones.

× But if I have to give example of my close one, I would say my FA friend Anna really love flowers.

✓ But if I have to give an example of my close one, I would say my FA friend Anna really loves flowers.

'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'Anna'. Also, 'give example' should be 'give an example'.

× There are some flowers where I live but not that much.

✓ There are some flowers where I live, but not that many.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'many' is correct for countable nouns like 'flowers'.

× We don't actually have garden here in the center of city, but there are some local flowers on the pavement as * ****.

✓ We don't actually have a garden here in the center of the city, but there are some local flowers on the pavement as well.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'garden' and 'the' before 'city'. Also, 'as * ****' seems incomplete and should be 'as well' to indicate addition.

× I would definitely take photo if I found flowers on my way, but as I mentioned before, Thailand don't doesn't really have flowers as a decoration on the road.

✓ I would definitely take photos if I found flowers on my way, but as I mentioned before, Thailand doesn't really have flowers as decoration on the road.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general usage. 'Don't doesn't' is incorrect; 'doesn't' is correct for singular subject 'Thailand'. Also, 'as a decoration' can be simplified to 'as decoration'.

× There aren't any customs about sending flowers, but we usually send them during meaningful events like graduation ceremony, wedding, or congratulation in getting a new job.

✓ There aren't any customs about sending flowers, but we usually send them during meaningful events like graduation ceremonies, weddings, or to congratulate someone on getting a new job.

'Graduation ceremony' and 'wedding' should be plural to match 'events'. 'Congratulation in getting a new job' is incorrect; it should be 'to congratulate someone on getting a new job'.