Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的时态和词汇。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are very fragrant. For example, when I feel tired from doing homework, I like to look at flowers because they help me relax and reduce stress.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用简单句子，避免重复，并正确使用代词和动词形式。

例: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. She knows many kinds of flowers and often plants them in her house because she really enjoys it.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，正确使用介词和名词复数形式，避免重复。

例: Yes, there are many flowers near my home. For example, there is a garden nearby that has a lot of roses and other flowers.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，明确表达观点。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I believe they are very beautiful. Different flowers have different colors and shapes, which create lovely scenes.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不完整且含糊。建议使用完整句子，正确使用名词和动词，明确说明节日和送花的原因。

例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others. For example, on Mother's Day, people usually send flowers to their mothers to show their love and appreciation.

× Yes, I found the flowers because the flowers is very fragrant and uh, uh, for example, uh, when I was tired in my homework, I always, uh, looking, looking the flowers.

✓ Yes, I like the flowers because the flowers are very fragrant and, for example, when I am tired from my homework, I always look at the flowers.

这里“the flowers is”中的“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，这是单复数一致错误。"I always, uh, looking, looking the flowers"中动词形式错误，应使用一般现在时“look at”。此外，“found”用错，应为“like”表示喜欢花。

× Yes, I found the flowers because the flowers is very fragrant and uh, uh, for example, uh, when I was tired in my homework, I always, uh, looking, looking the flowers.

✓ Yes, I like the flowers because the flowers are very fragrant and, for example, when I am tired from my homework, I always look at the flowers.

动词“looking”在此句中用法错误，应使用一般现在时“look”来表达习惯动作。

× when I was tired in my homework

✓ when I was tired from my homework

“tired”后面应接介词“from”表示因某事感到疲劳，而不是“in”。

× the flowers is very fragrant

✓ the flowers are very fragrant

“flowers”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× my best friend she, she, she loves flowers and she knows uh, of a variety of flowers acknowledged and she always transplants the flowers in their Hou in she's house.

✓ My best friend loves flowers and she knows a variety of flowers. She always transplants flowers in her house.

句中重复使用主语“she”冗余，应去掉多余部分。"their Hou in she's house"表达混乱，应改为“her house”。

× Uh, she very liked it.

✓ She likes it very much.

“very liked”结构错误，应使用一般现在时“likes”，并将“very”放在“much”前形成“very much”修饰动词。

× Yes, uh, I it's a lot of flowers inter near near my home, for example, uh, uh, uh, the nearby has a gardens.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers near my home. For example, there is a garden nearby.

“I it's a lot of flowers”结构错误，应使用“There are a lot of flowers”。“the nearby has a gardens”应改为“There is a garden nearby”，注意单复数和句型。

× the nearby has a gardens.

✓ There is a garden nearby.

“a gardens”中“gardens”为复数，前面冠词用单数“a”错误，应改为单数“garden”。

× They're they're having there has a lot of uh, rose and each other.

✓ There are a lot of roses and other flowers.

句子结构混乱，“They're they're having there has”不合语法，应改为“There are”。“rose”应为复数“roses”。“each other”用法错误，应改为“other flowers”。

× Yes, I always taking photos in my daily life because I think because I believe that, uh, flowers very beautiful and uh, uh, the smile is very good and the some and the vulvarity and different flowers has a different beautiful scenes.

✓ Yes, I always take photos in my daily life because I think, I believe that flowers are very beautiful, and the smell is very good. The variety of different flowers has different beautiful scenes.

“I always taking”应为一般现在时“I always take”。“flowers very beautiful”缺少系动词，应为“flowers are very beautiful”。“smile”应为“smell”。“vulvarity”拼写错误，应为“variety”。

× Yes, uh, in my countries, people likes to people fond of, uh, send flowers to other peoples, for example, uh, in the, in the Mother days, people always send the connections to their mom or their other, uh, homework, uh, because.

✓ Yes, in my country, people like to send flowers to others. For example, on Mother's Day, people always send flowers to their mom or other family members.

“countries”应为单数“country”。“people likes”主谓不一致，应为“people like”。“people fond of”结构错误，应去掉。 “other peoples”应为“others”。“Mother days”应为“Mother's Day”。“connections”用词错误，应为“flowers”。“homework”用词错误，应为“family members”或“relatives”。