Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and clear, but you can improve by making it more concise and adding a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because I really like how they smell.

提案: Try to avoid redundancy and improve grammar by using correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers; every Sunday she buys some from the flower shop and puts them in a vase, which makes the room smell nice.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more specific and structured. Use linking words and avoid filler words like 'just'.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because I currently live in the countryside, where most people appreciate flowers.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not keen on photography; however, if I see a unique flower, I might take a picture.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences with linking words for better coherence.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, mostly on birthdays and anniversaries; personally, I like to give flowers to my mother on Mother's Day.

× ...and put them in a vase and they really smell nice.

✓ ...and puts them in a vase and they really smell nice.

The subject 'she' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'puts' to agree with the subject. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.