Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using plural forms correctly and linking ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance always lifts my mood and helps me feel positive.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains repetition and minor grammar errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers a lot. She grows many types at home, such as jasmine, and takes great care of them.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your sentences better and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

例: No, there aren't many flowers around because my community is close to several universities, so there aren't many flower shops nearby, making it hard to buy flowers.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I love taking photos of flowers because their beauty cheers me up. Whenever I feel down, I look at these photos to improve my mood.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid redundancy. Use specific examples of occasions to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to celebrate special occasions like birthdays, weddings, and festivals as a way to express their feelings.

× Of course, flowers have fragrance and it can help me keep a positive emotion.

✓ Of course, flowers have fragrance and they can help me keep a positive emotion.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should also be plural ('they') instead of singular ('it'). This ensures subject-pronoun agreement.

× She plants many flowers at home like Jasmine, and she takes good good care of the flowers.

✓ She plants many flowers at home like jasmine, and she takes good care of the flowers.

The word 'Jasmine' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun or at the beginning of a sentence. Also, the phrase 'good good care' is repetitive; it should be 'good care' for clarity and correctness.

× No, they are not because my community is near to some universities so there's not very many flower shop there, so we it's hard for us to buy flowers.

✓ No, they are not because my community is near some universities, so there aren't very many flower shops there, so it's hard for us to buy flowers.

The phrase 'not very many flower shop' is incorrect because 'shop' should be plural ('shops') to match 'many'. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there aren't' (there are not) to agree with the plural noun 'shops'. The phrase 'near to' should be 'near' without 'to'. The phrase 'we it's hard' is incorrect and should be 'it's hard for us'.