Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: Yes, I love flowers, but I prefer to enjoy them outdoors because taking care of them at home requires a lot of time and effort, such as treating diseases or pruning.

提案: 回答中存在代词错误和语法错误，建议注意主谓一致和代词使用，同时丰富细节使表达更具体。

例: My mom loves flowers and has many at home. She believes that taking care of them helps her relieve stress from work.

提案: 回答中时态和词汇使用不准确，建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达，同时增加具体细节。

例: In the city where I live, there are many plants and flowers along the streets. They blend well with the environment, making the area pleasant and relaxing.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连词使表达更连贯。

例: During special seasons, many flowers bloom in the park and on the streets. I often take photos of them in my free time because their beauty makes me feel relaxed and appreciate life.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，表达不够自然，建议使用正确的节日名称和更地道的表达方式，同时注意语法和连贯性。

例: People in my country send flowers on different occasions. For example, on Valentine's Day, we give roses to express love. During the Qingming Festival, we offer flowers to honor and remember martyrs.

× it takes a lot of time and process to taking care of it.

✓ it takes a lot of time and process to take care of it.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里应使用to take而不是to taking。

× Like altering or get rid of sickness for the.

✓ Like altering or getting rid of sickness for it.

代词使用错误，前文指代的是花，应使用it而不是the。此外，动词形式应保持一致，get应改为getting。

× He likes flowers very much and have a lot of it in her home.

✓ She likes flowers very much and has a lot of them in her home.

代词使用错误，指代母亲应使用she而非he；动词与主语不一致，has替代have；flowers为复数，代词应使用them而非it。

× She thinks that taking care of flowers is a relief of stress or pressure in work.

✓ She thinks that taking care of flowers is a relief from stress or pressure at work.

介词使用错误，relief后应接from表示“缓解”；介词in work应改为at work表示“在工作中”。

× there's a lot of vegetation besides the streets, including a lot of flowers.

✓ there's a lot of vegetation beside the streets, including a lot of flowers.

介词使用错误，besides意为“除了”，应使用beside表示“在……旁边”。

× They lived perfectly and have a good combination with the streets, making us relieved and delighted.

✓ They live perfectly and have a good combination with the streets, making us relieved and delighted.

时态错误，描述现在的情况应使用一般现在时live而非过去式lived。

× so I always take photos for them when I was have spare time.

✓ so I always take photos of them when I have spare time.

时态错误，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时have而非过去时was have；介词错误，take photos of而非for。

× They're always beautiful. They're when they're blossoming so it can makes me feel the power of life and makes me relaxed after seeing it.

✓ They're always beautiful when they're blossoming, so they can make me feel the power of life and make me relaxed after seeing them.

代词使用错误，it应改为they指代flowers；动词单复数不一致，makes应改为make。

× For example, in Valentine, we often send roses to express their romance and delight to others.

✓ For example, on Valentine's Day, we often send roses to express our romance and delight to others.

介词使用错误，节日应使用on；Valentine应为Valentine's Day；代词错误，表达自己的感情应使用our而非their。

× In Singing festival, we always send flowers to martyrs for memorizing them and remember the history.

✓ In the Singing Festival, we always send flowers to martyrs to commemorate them and remember history.

冠词缺失，节日名称前应加the；介词使用错误，for memorizing应改为to commemorate；history前不加the。