Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複（"how how"），建議注意語言的自然流暢性，並避免重複。回答可以更直接，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

例: I don't love flowers, but I appreciate their vibrant colors because they brighten up my daily life. For example, I often admire beautiful flowers in parks or gardens, although I rarely buy them for myself.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤（如動詞單複數不一致），且句子不夠流暢，有重複詞語（"and the and the"），建議加強語法正確性和句子連貫性。

例: Yes, one of my best friends loves flowers very much. For example, she usually goes to the flower market on weekends. Although I find those places a bit crowded, she really enjoys the atmosphere and buys flowers to use as decorations.

提案: 回答中語句結構不清晰且有語法錯誤，建議簡化句子並使用連接詞使表達更清楚。

例: That's an interesting question. I haven't noticed many flowers near my house for a long time because there are more green trees than colorful flowers on the street.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤（"in other counties" 應為 "in other countries"，"when I looking" 應為 "when I look"），建議注意語法正確性並使句子更自然。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of natural scenery, including flowers. For example, once I took a picture of a strange flower I found in another country, and even now, when I look at the photo, it brings back special memories.

提案: 回答內容清楚，但句子結構可以更簡潔，並注意語法（"to other" 應為 "to others"）。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: I think in Taiwan, some people like to receive flowers as gifts; however, others prefer more practical items like clothing or accessories. Therefore, sending flowers is not always a bad choice.

× I admired beautiful flowers in parks or gardens, but I rarely buy flowers for myself.

✓ I have admired beautiful flowers in parks or gardens, but I rarely buy flowers for myself.

The sentence describes a past experience relevant to the present, so the present perfect tense ('have admired') is more appropriate than the simple past ('admired').

× One of my best friends love flowers so much.

✓ One of my best friends loves flowers so much.

The subject 'One' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'loves' to agree with the subject.

× she usually go to the flower market on weekends

✓ she usually goes to the flower market on weekends

The third person singular subject 'she' requires the verb to be in the third person singular form 'goes'.

× I think those places is a little bit crowd for me.

✓ I think those places are a little bit crowded for me.

The plural subject 'places' requires the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'crowd' should be the adjective 'crowded' to describe the places.

× But she really enjoyed the atmosphere and the and the flowers there and they will bite it as a decoration for.

✓ But she really enjoys the atmosphere and the flowers there and she will buy them as decorations.

The verb 'enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoys' to match the habitual action. 'Bite' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'buy'. Also, 'they' should be 'she' to refer to the friend, and 'it' should be 'them' to refer to flowers. 'Decoration' should be plural 'decorations'.

× I think I have there's been a long time that I haven't noticed the flowers in my near my house because most of the time I observe that there are more green trees than colorful flowers on the street.

✓ I think it's been a long time since I noticed the flowers near my house because most of the time I observe that there are more green trees than colorful flowers on the street.

The phrase 'I have there's been' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'it's been a long time since'. Also, 'in my near my house' is incorrect; it should be 'near my house'.

× even now when I looking at the photo, it brings some special memories.

✓ even now when I am looking at the photo, it brings some special memories.

After 'when I', the verb should be in the present continuous form 'am looking' to indicate an ongoing action.

× I enjoy taking photos for natural scenery, including flowers.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of natural scenery, including flowers.

The correct preposition to use with 'taking photos' is 'of', not 'for'.

× So I think it is not always a bad choice to send flowers to other.

✓ So I think it is not always a bad choice to send flowers to others.

The pronoun 'other' is incorrect here; the plural form 'others' should be used to refer to other people.