Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“some flowers is have”应为“some flowers have”，同时句子较长且缺乏连贯的连接词，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they have bright colors and a pleasant smell. Sometimes, I pick flowers to give to my friends as gifts.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和词汇错误，如“knows”应为“know”，“files”应为“flowers”，“fountain”应为“flowers”，且表达重复且不连贯。建议加强语法基础，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: Actually, I don't know anyone who loves flowers. None of my family or friends keep flowers at home, so I think they are not very interested in them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“cultivate their flowers in youth”不清楚含义，且句子未完整表达。建议使用清晰准确的表达，并补充完整信息。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Many neighbors grow flowers in their gardens, especially for special occasions like Chinese New Year.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“files”应为“flowers”，且表达略显口语化和重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达观点。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I prefer to enjoy them in person rather than sharing pictures on social media.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误，如“send the vowels”应为“send flowers”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意语法和词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't think people often send flowers to each other in my country because some may not like flowers or have space to keep them at home.

× Yes I love flowers because some flowers is have bright colors and smell good so I love it and sometime I will carry out the flower to give to my friends.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because some flowers have bright colors and smell good, so I love them and sometimes I will carry flowers to give to my friends.

这里'some flowers is have'中flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'have'，而不是单数'is have'。另外，'sometime'应为副词'sometimes'，表示有时。'carry out the flower'表达不准确，应为'carry flowers'。'it'指代复数flowers，应改为'them'。

× Umm, I don't actually knows who love files.

✓ Umm, I don't actually know who loves flowers.

'I don't'后面动词应为原形，故'knows'应改为'know'。'who'作为第三人称单数，谓语动词应为'loves'。另外，'files'应为'flowers'。

× I think is no one love flowers, umm, because umm, all my family and friends don't uh, have the fountain in their house and I haven't seen before.

✓ I think no one loves flowers, umm, because umm, all my family and friends don't have flowers in their house and I haven't seen any before.

'is no one love'结构错误，应为'no one loves'，'no one'为单数，谓语用第三人称单数'loves'。'fountain'应为'flowers'。'have the fountain'应为'have flowers'。

× So I think no one have the flowers and they don't love flowers.

✓ So I think no one has flowers and they don't love flowers.

'no one'为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'has'，而不是' have'。

× Yes, and they have a lot of flowers where I live and there are many uh, neighborhood who have uh, cultivate their flowers in youth.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live and there are many neighborhoods who cultivate their flowers in youth.

'neighborhood'应为复数形式'neighborhoods'。'who have cultivate'结构错误，应为'who cultivate'。

× there are many uh, neighborhood who have uh, cultivate their flowers in youth.

✓ there are many neighborhoods who cultivate their flowers in youth.

'have cultivate'结构错误，动词后不应直接跟动词原形，应改为单一动词'cultivate'。

× No, I don't take any pictures when I see a files because I prefer to uh, watch flowers in persons rather than, umm, take a pictures to send, uh, social media.

✓ No, I don't take any pictures when I see flowers because I prefer to watch flowers in person rather than take pictures to send on social media.

'a files'错误，'files'应为'flowers'且不加冠词。'in persons'应为'in person'。'a pictures'错误，pictures为复数，不加冠词。'send, uh, social media'应为'send on social media'。

× take a pictures to send, uh, social media.

✓ take pictures to send on social media.

动词'send'后应接介词'on'表示在社交媒体上发送。

× I think uh, it is not often to send flowers to each others.

✓ I think uh, it is not often to send flowers to each other.

'each others'错误，'each other'表示彼此，后面不加复数形式。

× So there are not uh, people to send the vowels.

✓ So there are not uh, people to send the flowers.

'vowels'应为'flowers'，单词拼写错误。