Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tự nhiên và có nội dung phong phú, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really love flowers because they brighten up any environment and make it more vibrant. For instance, I often place fresh flowers at home, which creates a pleasant, refreshing, and calming atmosphere. Additionally, their lovely fragrance uplifts my mood and helps me feel more relaxed and connected with nature.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'is loves' và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers—my aunt. She is a passionate gardener who spends a lot of time cultivating various types of flowers because gardening is very exciting and rewarding for her. For example, she often talks about the meticulous care she gives to her plants to help them grow beautifully.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ số nhiều đúng cách và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi nhỏ về danh từ số nhiều.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in the parks and gardens nearby. For example, I often see beautiful roses and sunflowers that bloom brightly in the morning. These flowers reflect the natural environment and make the area very colorful and pleasant.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt, tự nhiên và có nội dung phong phú. Bạn có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn nữa.

例: Yes, absolutely. I'm the kind of person who really enjoys taking photos of natural scenery, especially flowers. Whenever I come across beautiful blooms in places like parks or gardens, I like to capture their vibrant colors and delicate details because it helps me appreciate the beauty of nature more deeply and creates lasting memories.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng danh từ số nhiều đúng cách và có thể thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, sending flowers is a popular tradition in Vietnam. For example, on Valentine's Day, people often give roses to their loved ones to express their affections. Additionally, on Women's Day, many people present flowers to the important women in their lives as a sign of respect and appreciation.

× Yes, I do know someone who is loves flowers.

✓ Yes, I do know someone who loves flowers.

The verb 'loves' should be used without 'is' in this context because 'who' refers to a singular subject and requires the simple present tense verb form. The phrase 'is loves' is incorrect because 'is' is an auxiliary verb used with present participles or past participles, not with the simple present tense verb form.

× she often talks about the meticulous care she gives to her plans to help them grow beautifully.

✓ she often talks about the meticulous care she gives to her plants to help them grow beautifully.

The word 'plans' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'plants' which refers to living organisms that grow. 'Plans' means intentions or arrangements, which does not fit the context of gardening.

× Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in the park and gardeners nearby.

✓ Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in the park and gardens nearby.

The word 'gardeners' refers to people who tend gardens, but the sentence intends to refer to places where flowers grow, so the correct word is 'gardens' (plural noun for garden).

× I often see beautiful rose and sunflowers that bloom brightly in the morning.

✓ I often see beautiful roses and sunflowers that bloom brightly in the morning.

The noun 'rose' should be pluralized to 'roses' to match the plural 'sunflowers' and to indicate multiple flowers. This maintains parallel structure and correct plural usage.

× people often give rose to their loved one to express their affections.

✓ people often give roses to their loved ones to express their affections.

'Rose' should be pluralized to 'roses' because people usually give multiple flowers. Also, 'loved one' should be pluralized to 'loved ones' to agree with the plural subject 'people' and the plural object 'roses'.