Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“different kinds of flowers such as roses, carnations, and other beautiful flowers are all of my favorite flowers”显得冗余。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意动词搭配，如“plant them”而非“plant it”。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. Roses and carnations are my favorites because of their beautiful colors and pleasant scents. I often buy flowers to plant on my balcony, which makes my home more lively and cheerful.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“they ** *** thinks”及“he enjoy”，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意主谓一致，并用连接词使表达连贯。

例: My mother loves flowers very much. She finds that flowers bring her comfort and happiness. She enjoys planting various kinds of flowers and watching them grow day by day.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“there aren't plenty of flowers”应为“there aren't many flowers”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子，使用正确的量词和连接词。

例: Actually, there are not many flowers where I live because the area is full of tall buildings. It is a modern place with little green space.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不当，如“Indefinitely”应为“Definitely”，句子结构复杂且不连贯。建议使用简单句，注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

例: Definitely, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when they are blooming. I have a special album full of flower pictures, and I really enjoy photography.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my country, flowers are a special gift symbolizing blessings and happiness. For example, people often receive flowers at birthday parties as a sign of good wishes.

× I'm a big fan of flowers, and different kinds of flowers such as roses, carnations, and other beautiful flowers are all of my favorite flowers.

✓ I'm a big fan of flowers, and different kinds of flowers such as roses, carnations, and other beautiful flowers are all my favorite flowers.

这里的“all of my favorite flowers”中“of”是不必要的，正确表达是“all my favorite flowers”，表示“我所有喜欢的花”。

× I often buy some flowers to plant it on my balcony.

✓ I often buy some flowers to plant them on my balcony.

句中“flowers”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× My mom is a flower enthusiast because they ** *** thinks flowers can bring the bring her a sense of comfort and he enjoy planting different kinds of flowers and see them growing growing up day by day.

✓ My mom is a flower enthusiast because she thinks flowers can bring her a sense of comfort and she enjoys planting different kinds of flowers and seeing them grow day by day.

主语是单数“my mom”，代词应为“she”，动词需加第三人称单数形式“thinks”和“enjoys”。“bring the bring her”是重复错误，应删去多余部分。动词“see”后应使用动名词形式“seeing”，并且“growing growing up”重复，应简化为“grow”。

× Actually there aren't plenty of flowers in my place where I live because the place where I live is full of tall buildings and it is modern style and don't have so much green style.

✓ Actually there aren't many flowers in my place where I live because the place where I live is full of tall buildings and it is modern in style and doesn't have much greenery.

“aren't plenty of”表达不正确，应使用“aren't many”。“don't have”主语是单数“it”，应改为“doesn't have”。“so much green style”表达不自然，改为“much greenery”更合适。

× Indefinitely, I always catch a unforgettable moment that such as flowers blossom and other photos about flowers in my daily life, and I have a unique album that is full of different kinds of flowers photo, and I really enjoy taking photos.

✓ Definitely, I always capture unforgettable moments such as flowers blossoming and other photos of flowers in my daily life, and I have a unique album that is full of different kinds of flower photos, and I really enjoy taking photos.

“Indefinitely”用词错误，应为“Definitely”。“catch a unforgettable moment”应改为“capture unforgettable moments”，冠词“a”与“unforgettable”搭配错误。动词“blossom”应使用动名词“blossoming”。“photos about flowers”应改为“photos of flowers”。“flowers photo”应为复数“flower photos”。

× In my country's flowers is a special gift and it has a a certain symbol of blessings and other things like happiness and in to take a example, in others birthday parties, they often receive flowers at the.

✓ In my country, flowers are a special gift and have a certain symbolism of blessings and other things like happiness. For example, at others' birthday parties, they often receive flowers.

“In my country's flowers is”主谓不一致，应为“flowers are”。“a a”重复，应删去一个。“symbol”应为复数或用“symbolism”更合适。句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整表达。“in to take a example”错误，应为“For example”。“others birthday parties”应为“others' birthday parties”。句尾“at the”不完整，应删去。