Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简单，表达有些重复且不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免列举过多类似的词汇。

例: Yes, I really love flowers because they often symbolize emotions like love and friendship, which makes them very meaningful to me.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She grows many different kinds of flowers at home and takes great care of them.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意语法和逻辑连贯性，避免句子中断。

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my city, especially in parks and along the streets. They brighten up the environment and make people feel happy when they pass by.

提案: 表达重复且时态使用不当。建议使用现在时描述习惯动作，避免重复，并且表达更自然。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially during spring and summer. Whenever I see beautiful flowers, I take out my phone to capture their beauty.

提案: 表达不够流畅，句子结构简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子连贯和词汇准确。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express their feelings. It's a way to share beauty and show care to others.

× I believe that flower is a symbol of romantic feelings such as love, friendship, partnership and so on.

✓ I believe that flowers are a symbol of romantic feelings such as love, friendship, partnership and so on.

这里的flower应使用复数形式flowers，因为后面提到的是多种浪漫情感的象征，表示泛指多种花。主语是复数，谓语动词也应相应变为are。

× Actually the the people love the flowers. I know is my mother.

✓ Actually, the person who loves flowers I know is my mother.

原句中the the people重复且用词不当，应改为the person who loves flowers，表示我认识的爱花的人是我母亲。people是复数，和后文的is不匹配。

× She is a person who is crazy about flowers because she cultivate many flowers in my home.

✓ She is a person who is crazy about flowers because she cultivates many flowers in my home.

主语she是第三人称单数，动词cultivate应加-s变为cultivates，表示现在时态的第三人称单数形式。

× Yes, in the city I live from Zhao Sheng province, it has many flowers around the city in the park or besides the streets.

✓ Yes, in the city where I live, Zhao Sheng province, there are many flowers around the city in the park or beside the streets.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词，且there be结构使用不当。应使用there are表示存在，besides应改为beside表示位置。

× I think flowers can make us who pass by them have a.

✓ I think flowers can make us who pass by them happy.

原句不完整，缺少宾语，导致句子不通顺。应补充形容词happy，使句子完整表达意思。

× Every time when I passed by the beautiful flowers, especially in the spring and summer, I always I always took out my phone and took pictures of them.

✓ Every time when I pass by the beautiful flowers, especially in the spring and summer, I always take out my phone and take pictures of them.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，原句使用过去时不符合语境。

× I want to keep the beautiful signs.

✓ I want to keep the beautiful scenes.

signs（标志）用词不当，应使用scenes（景象）更符合拍摄花的美丽画面。

× Yes, in the country. In my country, people often send flowers to others.

✓ Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others.

原句中“in the country.”独立成句，结构不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× It is not only a sharing of beautiful things, but also a feeling to express others the beautiful feelings.

✓ It is not only a sharing of beautiful things, but also a way to express beautiful feelings to others.

表达不清晰，to express others the beautiful feelings结构错误，应改为express beautiful feelings to others，符合英语习惯。