Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and hesitation. Improve fluency by avoiding repeated words and incomplete sentences. Use a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons with linking words.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and their fragrance helps me relax. However, I prefer growing vegetables since they are more useful for cooking.

提案: Good content but sentence is long and slightly awkward. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Be more specific about the types of flowers or how your mother influenced you.

例: Yes, my mother has loved flowers for many years and grows various kinds, such as roses and lilies. Because of her influence, I also developed an interest and learned about many different flowers.

提案: The answer is somewhat fragmented and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid short, incomplete sentences. Provide more specific details about the flowers or environment.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my town is in a suburban area surrounded by mountains. This natural environment allows various wildflowers to grow abundantly.

提案: Good explanation but contains some redundancy and minor grammar issues. Avoid repeating words and use linking words to make the answer more natural and concise.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are so common in my town. Also, I don't have the habit of uploading such photos online.

提案: Answer has repetition and could be clearer. Use linking words to contrast ideas and avoid repeating words. Provide a specific example or cultural context if possible.

例: No, people in my country don't often send flowers to others. Although it happens sometimes, it is not a common tradition or habit.

× my mother loves flowers and has been growing various kind of flowers for many years

✓ my mother loves flowers and has been growing various kinds of flowers for many years

The phrase 'various kind of flowers' is incorrect because 'various' should be followed by a plural noun. The correct phrase is 'various kinds of flowers'. This is a quantifier usage issue where the noun must agree in number with the quantifier.

× I also came to like flowers and know many kind of flowers.

✓ I also came to like flowers and know many kinds of flowers.

Similar to the previous error, 'many kind of flowers' is incorrect because 'many' requires a plural noun. The correct phrase is 'many kinds of flowers'. This is a quantifier usage issue requiring plural form after 'many'.

× Yes they are because I live in a suburban area and the town is surrounded by mountains so there are many flowers. In my town.

✓ Yes, there are because I live in a suburban area and the town is surrounded by mountains so there are many flowers in my town.

The original sentence uses 'Yes they are' which is incorrect in response to 'Are there a lot of flowers?'. The correct response is 'Yes, there are' to indicate existence. Also, the sentence fragment 'In my town.' should be connected to the previous sentence. This is a 'There be' issue involving correct usage of existential 'there'.

× I prefer growing vegetables than growing flowers.

✓ I prefer growing vegetables to growing flowers.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two activities, not 'than'. The correct preposition is 'to' in this context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions error.