Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持，比如说喜欢玫瑰花因为它们颜色鲜艳且香气宜人。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I especially like roses because they have a beautiful color and a pleasant fragrance.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议用完整句子表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯，比如说“my grandma loves flowers because she has a garden where she grows many kinds of flowers, especially roses.”

例: Yes, my grandma loves flowers. She has a garden where she grows many kinds of flowers, especially roses.

提案: 回答中语法混乱且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持，比如“我住在城市里，花不多，但有很多树。”

例: To be honest, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in a city. However, there are many trees planted around.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达喜欢拍花的原因，并用连接词使句子流畅，比如“Because I enjoy capturing beautiful things, I often take photos of flowers, which make me feel happy and relaxed.”

例: Because I enjoy capturing beautiful things, I often take photos of flowers. They make me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题并用具体例子说明，比如“在我国家，人们常常在生日或特殊场合送花，因为花代表不同的意义。”

例: In my country, people often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays because flowers have different symbolic meanings.

× I prefer I prefer rose and and other flowers because flowers can make air refresh and this and their and their make if I and.

✓ I prefer roses and other flowers because flowers can make the air fresh.

这里“rose”应使用复数形式“roses”，因为表示一般喜欢多种玫瑰花。名词复数形式错误属于单复数问题。

× She have a garden to plant flowers, all kind of flowers.

✓ She has a garden to plant flowers, all kinds of flowers.

主语是第三人称单数“She”，谓语动词应使用“has”而非“have”，这是主谓一致错误。

× She have a garden to plant flowers, all kind of flowers.

✓ She has a garden to plant flowers, all kinds of flowers.

“all kind of flowers”应为“all kinds of flowers”，表示多种类，属于单复数错误。

× She she most like rose and some uh and some modern flowers.

✓ She mostly likes roses and some modern flowers.

“She”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“likes”，且“most like”应改为副词“mostly”，这是主谓一致和副词使用错误。

× there are not a lot of flower in my, in my, in my, in my blog because I live in a city.

✓ There are not a lot of flowers in my blog because I live in a city.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，且“blog”应为“block”或“area”，这里主要是单复数错误和词汇错误。

× I'm are no flower, uh, planted is in Australia and the most tree are planted in it.

✓ There are no flowers planted here in Australia, and most trees are planted here.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，且句子结构混乱，需调整为“There are no flowers...”，属于单复数和句子结构错误。

× I very like take photos of flowers because I like to, uh, to take photos as every beautiful things, uh, uh, like flowers and, uh, and the beautiful peoples.

✓ I really like to take photos of flowers because I like to take photos of all beautiful things, like flowers and beautiful people.

“very like”应改为“really like”，且“peoples”应为“people”，属于情态动词和名词复数错误。

× In an e-mail, opinion said 4 hours to others is popular activities in in my country, flowers symbols different means.

✓ In my opinion, sending flowers to others is a popular activity in my country; flowers symbolize different meanings.

“4 hours”应为“flowers”，“activities”应为单数“activity”，且句子结构需调整，属于量词和句子结构错误。

× If some people, uh, if some people are birthday a a a a get a hold of birthday party, someone can uh, send some flowers to them to them.

✓ If some people have a birthday or hold a birthday party, someone can send flowers to them.

“are birthday a get a hold of birthday party”表达混乱，且重复“to them”，属于代词使用和句子结构错误。