Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'I like, I like'. Also, use correct grammar like 'trees that bloom flowers' instead of 'trees that blooms flowers'. Keep your answer concise and natural by limiting to 3-4 sentences and adding linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I enjoy planting flowering trees because I like to see their beautiful blooms and smell their fragrance. Overall, I appreciate all kinds of flowers for their beauty and scent.

提案: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'My husband also loves flowers and enjoys planting them with me. We spend mornings together watering and nourishing the plants.' This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, my husband also loves flowers and enjoys planting them with me. We often spend our mornings together watering and taking care of the plants, which strengthens our bond.

提案: Avoid filler words and incomplete phrases. Use correct expressions like 'many varieties of flowers'. Also, use linking words to explain your care for the flowers. For example, 'Yes, our garden has many varieties of flowers, and we take care of them daily as if they were our children.'

例: Yes, our garden has many varieties of flowers. We take care of them every day, nurturing them carefully as if they were our own children.

提案: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, we often take photos of our flowers and post them on social media like Instagram and Facebook, which gives us a rewarding feeling. Every morning, my husband and I photograph the blooming flowers while watering them.'

例: Yes, we often take photos of our flowers and post them on social media like Instagram and Facebook, which gives us a rewarding feeling. Every morning, my husband and I photograph the blooming flowers while watering them.

提案: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'Not really. As far as I know, people in my country do not often send flowers to others. Instead, they prefer to plant and nurture flowers in their own homes.'

例: Not really. As far as I know, people in my country do not often send flowers to others. Instead, they prefer to plant and nurture flowers in their own homes.

× I like the smell of these flowers Literally, I like every flowers.

✓ I like the smell of these flowers. Literally, I like every flower.

The word 'flowers' is plural, but 'every' should be followed by a singular noun. Hence, 'every flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'every flower'. This is a common singular and plural issue.

× plant trees that blooms flowers uh

✓ plant trees that bloom flowers uh

The relative clause refers to 'trees' which is plural, so the verb should be 'bloom' not 'blooms'. Using 'blooms' is a third person singular verb form which is incorrect here.

× he accompanied with me for planting the flowers

✓ he accompanied me for planting the flowers

The verb 'accompany' does not require the preposition 'with'. Saying 'accompanied with me' is incorrect; it should be 'accompanied me'.

× there are many variety of flowers

✓ there are many varieties of flowers

The word 'variety' is singular and should be pluralized to 'varieties' when preceded by 'many'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× we are plan, we are taking care of the flowers like uh, our children

✓ we are planning, we are taking care of the flowers like our children

The phrase 'we are plan' is incorrect; it should be 'we are planning'. Also, the preposition 'like' is used correctly here to compare care given to flowers to that given to children.

× we often take the photos of our flowers and we post it in social media

✓ we often take photos of our flowers and we post them on social media

'Photos' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'them' not 'it'. Also, the correct preposition with 'post' is 'on' social media, not 'in'.

× we post it in social media like Instagram, Facebook

✓ we post it on social media like Instagram, Facebook

The correct preposition to use with 'post' and 'social media' is 'on', not 'in'.

× take flow photos of flowers that blooms every morning

✓ take flower photos of flowers that bloom every morning

'Flow photos' seems to be a typo and should be 'flower photos'. Also, 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'bloom' not 'blooms'.

× people are not sending much flowers between them

✓ people are not sending many flowers to each other

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'flowers' is countable, so 'many' is correct. Also, 'between them' is better expressed as 'to each other' when referring to sending things.

× They are keep nurturing their flowers within their home itself

✓ They keep nurturing their flowers within their home itself

The phrase 'are keep' is incorrect. The correct present tense form is 'keep' without 'are'.