Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不流畅，且观点较为片面。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且给出更具体的理由。

例: No, I don't really love flowers because I rarely send them to my friends. I feel that flowers don't hold much meaning for me personally.

提案: 回答语法和表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, some of my friends really like flowers. They often wish to receive flowers on their birthdays.

提案: 回答结构不清晰，表达重复且不连贯。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体原因支持，并避免重复。

例: There aren't many flowers where I live because I prefer places with fewer flowers. The smell of flowers often makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词组织句子。

例: I rarely take photos of flowers or anything else because I don't have enough time. I prefer to listen to music or relax instead.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明。

例: In my country, people usually prefer to give meaningful and practical gifts rather than flowers, so flowers are not very common as gifts.

× I First of all, I seldom send a flower to my friends, so I think the flower is useless.

✓ First of all, I seldom send flowers to my friends, so I think flowers are useless.

这里的flower应使用复数形式flowers，因为指的是一般的花，而不是特指一朵花。friends是复数，送花也应是复数形式。

× Uh, my friends really like the flowers and I, he wish uh, somebody to send a flower to him when at their birth, at her birthdays.

✓ Uh, my friends really like flowers and they wish somebody would send flowers to them on their birthdays.

句中人称代词使用混乱，he与I混用，且birthday应为复数birthdays，且代词应与friends保持一致，使用they和them。

× And actually I don't like flowers, so I will choose some place contain less flowers and because every time, every time I get the smell, uh from this flower can make me uncomfortable.

✓ Actually, I don't like flowers, so I will choose places that contain fewer flowers because every time I get the smell from these flowers, it makes me uncomfortable.

contain后应加that引导定语从句；less用于不可数名词，flowers是可数名词，应使用fewer；smell后不应加逗号；this flower应改为these flowers与复数保持一致。

× And in my daylight, I seldom take a photos, not only the flowers, it's because I don't have any enough time to take photos and I prefer to do other things such as listen to music or going to the dreams I but I don't choose.

✓ In my daily life, I seldom take photos, not only of flowers, because I don't have enough time to take photos and I prefer to do other things such as listen to music or go to sleep, but I don't choose to.

daylight应为daily life；a photos错误，photos是复数，不加冠词；any enough重复，应去掉any；going to the dreams表达不清，改为go to sleep更合适。

× In my country, people tend to stand a useful gift to other people because when the gift contains a lot of meanings, so they will choose the gift carefully.

✓ In my country, people tend to send useful gifts to others because when the gift contains a lot of meaning, they will choose the gift carefully.

stand应为send；a useful gift改为useful gifts，gift前不加冠词且用复数；meanings改为meaning更合适；句中so多余，应去掉。