Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在时态错误和用词不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态一致性，并避免冗余。

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially when I see them blooming. Their bright colors always brighten my mood and make me feel more energetic.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如动词时态和搭配错误。建议使用正确的时态和更准确的词汇表达。

例: My dad loves gardening. He usually buys flower seeds to plant on the balcony, and sometimes he buys flower bouquets as gifts for my mom to show his love.

提案: 句子结构不完整且表达不流畅，存在语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的介词和时态，并清晰表达观点。

例: There are many flowers planted along the streets and in the parks near my home. However, I prefer not to have flowers at home because I am sensitive to their fragrance.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和表达错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议简化表达，使用正确的句子结构，并明确说明拍照的习惯和原因。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I walk in the park or on the street at night. I like to capture their beauty and share the pictures with my friends.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但用词稍显重复和不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，丰富词汇。

例: Yes, in my country, sending flowers is a traditional and common way to show appreciation to loved ones and friends.

× Their bright colour could enlighten my eyesight and made me feel more energetic.

✓ Their bright colour could enlighten my eyesight and make me feel more energetic.

这里使用了情态动词could，后面的动词应该用原形，所以made应改为make。

× He's a planting lover and he usually bought flower seeds to planting in the balcony and sometimes he bought branches of flowers for my mom as a gift to express.

✓ He's a planting lover and he usually buys flower seeds to plant on the balcony and sometimes he buys branches of flowers for my mom as a gift to express.

这里动词时态和形式错误，通常习惯用一般现在时，bought应改为buys，to planting应改为to plant，介词in the balcony应改为on the balcony。

× I only like seeing flowers planting in the along the street or in the park rather than planting them at home as I felt a bit of sensitive to the fragrance of the flower.

✓ I only like seeing flowers planted along the street or in the park rather than planting them at home as I feel a bit sensitive to the fragrance of the flowers.

介词使用错误，in the along the street应改为along the street；felt应改为feel保持时态一致；a bit of sensitive应改为a bit sensitive；flower应改为复数flowers。

× Yet I usually take photos for flowers. One night was walk on the street or go through the parks taking photos called the record, called the record Their Beauty and it is convenient to share with my friends.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers. Sometimes I walk on the street or go through the parks taking photos to record their beauty, and it is convenient to share with my friends.

句子结构混乱，Yet用法不当；take photos for flowers应为take photos of flowers；One night was walk on the street语法错误，改为Sometimes I walk；called the record Their Beauty表达不清，改为taking photos to record their beauty。

× Yes, in my country it is a traditional and conventional way to send flowers to your lovers or your friends to express your appreciations.

✓ Yes, in my country it is a traditional and conventional way to send flowers to your lovers or your friends to express your appreciation.

appreciations通常不可数，表达感谢时用appreciation，复数形式不合适。