Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they bring happiness and brighten up my day. For example, I feel delighted when someone gives me roses as a gift.

提案: 回答中存在代词使用错误和拼写错误，表达不清晰。建议注意代词的一致性和拼写准确，句子结构应更简洁明了。

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers. On her birthday, I always send her a bouquet of roses to show my love and appreciation, which always makes her happy.

提案: 回答中有许多词汇错误和不连贯的表达，影响理解。建议使用简单准确的词汇，避免拼写错误，保持句子连贯。

例: Yes, my hometown is famous for its many kinds of flowers. For example, lotuses bloom beautifully every summer in the central park lake, attracting many visitors and creating a peaceful environment.

提案: 回答中时态和表达不准确，句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because they give me a sense of peace and tranquility. Sometimes, when I walk in the park, I capture beautiful flowers with my camera.

提案: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够准确。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, there are many traditions of sending flowers in my country. For example, on Qi Shi, the Chinese Valentine's Day, people often give flowers to their loved ones.

× So I'll always be delighted when someone send to me some flowers, for example roses or something, because I think it is a good move for someone if there's something flower in front of it.

✓ So I'll always be delighted when someone sends me some flowers, for example roses or something, because I think it is a good gesture if there are some flowers in front of it.

动词send在这里的主语是第三人称单数someone，动词应加-s变为sends，符合主谓一致。'send to me'应简化为'sends me'，更地道。'something flower'应改为'flowers'，因为flower是可数名词，且此处应使用复数形式。

× Yes my mom likes flowers so when her birthday arrived I will always send him a rose, a bunch of flowers to express my GMU and appreciation to her so he always be happy when seeing it.

✓ Yes, my mom likes flowers, so when her birthday arrives I will always send her a rose, a bunch of flowers to express my gratitude and appreciation to her so she is always happy when seeing them.

'send him'中的'him'指代错误，应该是'mom'，用'her'。'her birthday arrived'时态不对，应该用一般现在时'arrive'，因为是习惯动作。'GMU'应为'gratitude'。'he always be happy'主语应为'she'，动词be应改为'is'。'seeing it'中的'it'应改为'them'，因为指的是复数的花。

× Yes, my Hunter is renowned for its vibrant variety of flowers, especially the Lotus, which blossoms beautifully every summer in the Central Park lake.

✓ Yes, my hometown is renowned for its vibrant variety of flowers, especially the lotus, which blossoms beautifully every summer in Central Park lake.

'Hunter'应为地名或'home town'，此处应改为'hometown'。'the Lotus'中的'Lotus'不需要大写，除非是专有名词。'the Central Park lake'中'Central Park'前不需要冠词'the'。

× The colorful petrol sandwich near atmosphere attracts many visitors and creates A refreshing environment for locals to enjoy peaceful orcs.

✓ The colorful petals near the atmosphere attract many visitors and create a refreshing environment for locals to enjoy peaceful parks.

'petrol sandwich near atmosphere'是错误的词组，应为'colorful petals near the water'或类似表达。'A'应小写'a'。'orcs'应为'parks'。整体句子中词汇使用错误，需用正确的名词和形容词。

× Yes, I like pictures of flowers because it gave me a sense of peaceful and tranquil in my life.

✓ Yes, I like pictures of flowers because they give me a sense of peace and tranquility in my life.

'it gave me'时态不对，应该用一般现在时'give'，因为是习惯性动作。'pictures'是复数，代词应为'they'。'peaceful'和'tranquil'是形容词，名词形式应为'peace'和'tranquility'。

× So in sometimes when I was walking around the park, I will capture some beautiful things.

✓ So sometimes when I am walking around the park, I capture some beautiful things.

'in sometimes'是不正确的搭配，应为'sometimes'。时态应统一，'was walking'改为一般现在时'am walking'或简单现在时。'will capture'改为'capture'，保持时态一致。

× Yes, there is many traditions about sending flowers to others in our country.

✓ Yes, there are many traditions about sending flowers to others in our country.

'there is'后面接复数名词'many traditions'，应使用'are'，保持主谓一致。