Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it not only a sense of perfumes”应为“they not only have a pleasant scent”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，提升表达的自然流畅度。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they have a pleasant scent and receiving them always makes me feel happier.

提案: 回答中存在人称错误（he应为she），语法错误（have应为has），且表达不够简洁。建议注意人称一致，使用连贯的句子，并减少口头语。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She enjoys decorating our home with various flowers because they make the rooms feel cozy.

提案: 回答缺乏具体信息且表达不流畅，存在重复和犹豫词。建议提前准备相关内容，使用完整句子，避免重复和犹豫。

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my city. For example, the Qing flower is famous and it represents our local culture.

提案: 回答中有较多口头语和重复，表达不够简洁。建议减少填充词，使用更自然的表达方式，增强句子连贯性。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are beautiful and they brighten my mood.

提案: 回答中重复“it is a symbol of”，且口头语较多。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，提升表达的逻辑性和流畅度。

例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to express their feelings, and receiving flowers usually makes people happy.

× That's because it not only a sense of perfumes, but also when I receive flowers, I I will be more happy.

✓ That's because it is not only a sense of perfume, but also when I receive flowers, I will be happier.

句子中缺少动词“is”，导致结构不完整；“perfumes”应为不可数名词“perfume”；“more happy”应改为比较级“happier”。

× And uh, he also have a preference for decorating home with a variety of flowers, umm, because it, it can make our, umm, room seems cozy.

✓ And uh, she also has a preference for decorating the home with a variety of flowers, umm, because it can make our room seem cozy.

代词“he”应为“she”与前文“my mother”一致；动词“have”应为第三人称单数“has”；“home”前应加定冠词“the”；“room seems”中“seems”应为原形“seem”，因前面有情态动词“can”。

× Umm, I remember it is called uh Qing Umm yeah, it's it's Chinese name and it represents for the specific culture.

✓ Umm, I remember it is called Qing. Umm, yeah, it's its Chinese name and it represents a specific culture.

“represents for”错误，动词“represent”后不加介词“for”；“it's it's”重复，应为“it's its”；“the specific culture”改为“a specific culture”更自然。

× Although I, I, I'm not fond of flowers, but I like taking photos with them, uh, because it can uh, delight my moods, uh, and also, umm, it is very beautiful.

✓ Although I'm not fond of flowers, I like taking photos of them because it can delight my mood, and also, umm, they are very beautiful.

“delight my moods”应为单数“delight my mood”；“it is very beautiful”指代复数“flowers”，应改为“they are very beautiful”；“taking photos with them”应为“taking photos of them”。

× Uh, maybe because, uh, it is a symbol of umm, umm, it is a symbol of showing likes to others, and when people receive it, they may feel delighted.

✓ Uh, maybe because, uh, it is a symbol of showing liking to others, and when people receive it, they may feel delighted.

“showing likes”表达不准确，应为“showing liking”或“showing affection”；保持句子简洁准确。