Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“police”应为“place”或“flower shop”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: Yes, I really love flowers. Whenever I pass by a flower shop, they catch my eye and make me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“blends”应为“plants”，“connection”不合适，且句子不连贯。建议使用正确词汇，句子结构清晰，表达具体细节。

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers. She plants various flowers on our balcony, such as Chinese roses and jasmine. She says they make the place lively and improve her mood.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Weather is on our balcony”不合适，且重复使用“roses”。建议简洁明了地描述花的种类和环境。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. On my balcony and in the community, you can see roses, cherry blossoms, and other beautiful flowers that make the area peaceful.

提案: 回答开头“Deaf India is”无意义且影响理解。建议去除无关词汇，句子更流畅自然，表达清晰。

例: Yes, whenever I see beautiful flowers like cherry blossoms in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take a quick photo. Sometimes I share them on social media, and sometimes I keep them for myself.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不完整，如“buses the 19 days”和“Connection”不合适，句子未完成。建议使用正确词汇，完整表达观点。

例: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions, such as birthdays or when someone is in the hospital. Sending flowers on Mother's Day is very common and a great way for children to show their love.

× every time when I pass by the police or a flower shop it usually catch my eye and make me feel more relaxed.

✓ every time when I pass by the police or a flower shop it usually catches my eye and makes me feel more relaxed.

主语是单数第三人称单数（it），谓语动词应加-s，表示单数第三人称现在时。

× She blends all kinds of flowers on our balcony at home, like Chinese roses, Jasmine and connection.

✓ She plants all kinds of flowers on our balcony at home, like Chinese roses, Jasmine and carnations.

动词用错，应该用plant（种植）而不是blend（混合）。另外，connection是错误的单词，应为carnations（康乃馨）。

× She says growing these friends made the whole place more alive and put in her, put her in her better mood.

✓ She says growing these flowers makes the whole place more alive and puts her in a better mood.

friends应为flowers，主语是单数第三人称，谓语动词应加-s，且表达更通顺。

× You can a lot of roses, cherries blooms and the beautiful roses which made the whole place alive and more peaceful.

✓ You can see a lot of roses, cherry blossoms and beautiful flowers which make the whole place alive and more peaceful.

缺少动词see，cherries blooms应为cherry blossoms，roses重复且语义不清，谓语动词应与复数主语一致。

× Deaf India is every time I look at beautiful flowers like cherry blossom in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take a quick photo.

✓ Definitely, every time I look at beautiful flowers like cherry blossoms in spring or sunflowers in summer, I usually take a quick photo.

Deaf India是错误表达，应为Definitely，且句子主语和谓语搭配正确。

× They usually send flowers on buses the 19 days or some when someone is in the hospital for example.

✓ They usually send flowers on birthdays or sometimes when someone is in the hospital, for example.

buses the 19 days是错误表达，应为birthdays，some应为sometimes，介词使用错误。

× Connection is very common on Mother's Day, which is great way for children to express their.

✓ Carnations are very common on Mother's Day, which is a great way for children to express their feelings.

Connection应为Carnations，复数形式，且句子不完整，补充表达使句子完整。