Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时表达较自然，但“ease my strength”用词不当，建议用更准确的表达，如“relax me”或“reduce my stress”。此外，回答稍显冗长，可简化并避免重复。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they have a calming effect and help me relax. However, I'm not very good at taking care of them, so they usually wither within a week.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体。建议使用连接词如“and”或“so”使句子更连贯，同时可以稍微丰富细节。

例: My sister-in-law loves flowers, so she often goes out of her way to visit parks to admire them, and my older brother often buys flowers for her as a gift.

提案: 回答内容具体，表达自然。建议合并句子，使用连接词如“because”或“but”使表达更流畅。

例: There aren't many flowers where I live now because it's winter and most have withered, but in spring, flowers are in full bloom everywhere.

提案: 回答较详细，但句子较多且有些重复。建议简化表达，使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”使句子更连贯。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm busy; I go to the library six days a week and only have Sunday off, which is when I sometimes take flower photos.

提案: 回答内容具体，表达自然。建议使用连接词如“for example”后紧接说明，避免句子断裂。

例: It depends on the person. For example, on Teachers Day, students often send flowers to their teachers, but my husband has never done that.

× My flowers always wither within a week.

✓ My flowers always wither within a week.

该句中“flowers”是复数形式，动词“wither”与复数主语一致，语法正确，无需修改。

× She will even go out of her way to visit a park to admire flowers and my older brother often buys flowers for her.

✓ She will even go out of her way to visit a park to admire flowers, and my older brother often buys flowers for her.

该句中两个并列分句之间缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。添加逗号后，句子更符合英语书写规范。

× Not many to be honest.

✓ There are not many, to be honest.

该句缺少主语和谓语，正确表达应使用“There are”结构表示“有很多”，使句子完整。

× Because it's winter now, most of the flowers have withered.

✓ Because it's winter now, most of the flowers have withered.

该句时态使用正确，描述现在的状态，动词时态与时间状语一致，无需修改。

× But in the spring it's totally different.

✓ But in the spring, it's totally different.

该句时态正确，描述一般事实。添加逗号使句子更清晰。

× Flowers are in full bloom everywhere.

✓ Flowers are in full bloom everywhere.

该句时态正确，描述一般事实，无需修改。

× No, I don't because I'm too busy to do it these days.

✓ No, I don't because I'm too busy to do it these days.

该句中“don't”用法正确，表达否定，符合语法规则，无需修改。

× I go to the library six days a week and just take one day off to rest.

✓ I go to the library six days a week and just take one day off to rest.

该句时态正确，描述习惯动作，无需修改。

× Sunday is my only leisure time.

✓ Sunday is my only leisure time.

该句时态正确，描述事实，无需修改。

× I only take photos of flowers on that day.

✓ I only take photos of flowers on that day.

该句时态正确，描述习惯动作，无需修改。

× Well, it varies from person to person.

✓ Well, it varies from person to person.

该句时态正确，描述一般事实，无需修改。

× For example, in my country on Teachers Day, students often send flowers to their teachers, but my husband has never done it before.

✓ For example, in my country on Teachers Day, students often send flowers to their teachers, but my husband has never done it before.

该句时态正确，描述习惯和过去经历，无需修改。