Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'brightly colors ones' nên là 'brightly colored ones' và 'it bring happiness and relax' nên là 'they bring happiness and relaxation'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially brightly colored ones because they bring happiness and relaxation. Moreover, flowers often symbolize joy and positivity.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'green finger' nên là 'a green thumb', 'spend many times' nên là 'spends a lot of time', và câu cuối chưa rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

例: Yes, my mother has a green thumb. She spends a lot of time watering and trimming her flowers. Moreover, she often cuts the flowers when they bloom to keep them healthy.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng giới từ và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'People at here' nên là 'People here'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: In Hanoi, there are many flowers. People here usually grow flowers along the streets or in front of their houses to make the environment more beautiful.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'I've already use' nên là 'I've already used'. Bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

例: I rarely take photos of flowers because my phone's storage is quite limited, and I've already used a lot of it for other things. However, when I see rare flowers, I sometimes take photos to capture their beauty.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến số nhiều và danh từ đếm được, ví dụ 'special day' nên là 'special days' và 'teacher days' nên là 'Teacher's Day'. Câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh và nên được nối với câu trước bằng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: In Vietnam, people often send flowers to others, especially on special days like Teacher's Day, to bring happiness and pleasure.

× Yes, I enjoy flowers especially brightly colors ones because it bring happiness and relax.

✓ Yes, I enjoy flowers, especially brightly colored ones because they bring happiness and relaxation.

The adjective 'brightly' should be 'bright' to correctly modify 'colored' as a compound adjective. 'Colors' should be singular 'colored' to describe 'ones'. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'ones'. 'Bring' needs to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Relax' should be the noun 'relaxation' to fit the context.

× Yes, my mother has green finger.

✓ Yes, my mother has green fingers.

The phrase 'green fingers' is an idiomatic expression meaning skill in gardening and is always plural.

× She always spend many times for watering and trimming many flowers.

✓ She always spends a lot of time watering and trimming many flowers.

'Spend' should be 'spends' to agree with third person singular subject 'She'. 'Many times' is incorrect; 'a lot of time' is the correct expression. 'For watering and trimming' should be 'watering and trimming' without 'for'.

× Moreover, when they bloom she often cut.

✓ Moreover, when they bloom, she often cuts them.

'Cut' should be 'cuts' to agree with third person singular 'she'. The pronoun 'them' is needed to refer back to 'flowers'.

× People at here usually grow flowers along the street or in front of houses.

✓ People here usually grow flowers along the street or in front of houses.

'At here' is incorrect; the correct phrase is simply 'here'.

× Umm to make the environment more beautiful.

✓ They do this to make the environment more beautiful.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject and verb. Adding 'They do this' completes the sentence.

× I've already use a lot of it for other things.

✓ I've already used a lot of it for other things.

'Use' should be in past participle form 'used' after 'have' in present perfect tense.

× especially in special day like teacher days.

✓ especially on special days like Teacher's Day.

'Day' should be plural 'days' to match 'special days'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' for days. 'Teacher days' should be 'Teacher's Day' as a proper noun.

× To bring happiness and pleasant.

✓ To bring happiness and pleasant feelings.

'Pleasant' is an adjective and needs a noun to complete the phrase, such as 'pleasant feelings'. The original phrase is incomplete.