Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且表达不够自然。建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性，避免重复和模糊表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers because each type symbolizes different meanings, such as love, luck, and happiness.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如主谓不一致，且表达不够连贯。建议注意主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have a classmate who loves flowers. He often plants various kinds, from small to beautiful ones, all kept in his room.

提案: 回答较为简单，句子结构稍显冗长且不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, there is a big garden near my house where many different kinds of flowers are planted.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构和用词有待改进。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免直译。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers and use them as my phone background because they are beautiful and make me happy.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议加强语法学习，使用更准确的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts to express friendship and good wishes.

× I think different flowers are the symbol of different. Meanings such as the love, lucky, exciting emotion and so on.

✓ I think different flowers are the symbols of different meanings such as love, luck, exciting emotions and so on.

这里'symbol'和'meanings'的单复数不匹配，应该用复数'symbols'和'meanings'。此外，冠词'the'在'love'和'lucky'前不合适，应去掉。'lucky'应改为名词'luck'，'exciting emotion'应改为复数形式'exciting emotions'。

× Yes, I know my classmates loves flowers.

✓ Yes, I know my classmate loves flowers.

'classmates'是复数，动词应为'know'的宾语，且后面动词'loves'应与单数主语'classmate'一致。这里应使用单数'classmate'，因为后面用的是单数动词'loves'。

× He often plant some flowers, from the small one to the very beautiful one.

✓ He often plants some flowers, from the small ones to the very beautiful ones.

主语是第三人称单数'He'，动词应加-s变为'plants'。'one'应改为复数形式'ones'，因为指多个花。

× It's all in his room.

✓ They are all in his room.

'It'指代单数，前文指多朵花，应使用复数代词'They'。

× Yes, because when I go out of my room and house there is a big garden and many different kinds of flowers are planted there.

✓ Yes, because when I go out of my room and house, there is a big garden where many different kinds of flowers are planted.

句子缺少逗号分隔，且'and house'前应加冠词'the'。另外，'there is a big garden and many different kinds of flowers are planted there'结构不够清晰，改为'there is a big garden where many different kinds of flowers are planted'更通顺。

× Sometimes I can use them for my background.

✓ Sometimes I use them as my background.

这里不需要使用情态动词'can'，直接用一般现在时表达习惯动作更合适。'for my background'应改为'as my background'。

× It's very beautiful and can take me happiness.

✓ It's very beautiful and can bring me happiness.

'take me happiness'表达不正确，应使用动词'bring'搭配'happiness'。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because nowadays flowers are plant more and more.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because nowadays flowers are planted more and more.

'flowers are plant'中'plant'应为过去分词'planted'，表示被动语态。

× They are like the gift we can show the them to others for our friendship and so on.

✓ They are like gifts we can give to others to show our friendship and so on.

'the gift'应为复数'gifts'，'show the them to others'结构错误，应改为'give to others to show'。