Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and mostly effective, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and minor grammar slips such as 'they're vibrant colors are'. Also, aim to keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I really love flowers because they brighten my mood whenever I see them. Their vibrant colours are refreshing to my eyes, and looking at flowers helps me feel more relaxed and uplifted.

提案: Good direct response with supporting details and linking words. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and vary sentence structures to make your answer more engaging and natural.

例: Yes, my mum loves flowers because she is very patient and dedicated to gardening. She cultivates a wide variety of flowers in our garden, which helps her feel calm and happy. Since I share her patience, we often spend quality time together tending to the plants.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains minor grammar errors like 'mom love' instead of 'mom loves'. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like 'some other colorful flowers that I'm not really sure about' by either describing them or omitting uncertain details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, there are plenty of flowers at my house because my mum loves gardening. She has planted many types, such as roses and lilies, which really brighten up the garden.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise by removing filler words like 'Umm'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I rarely visit natural places where I can find them, so I seldom have the chance to capture their beauty.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid leaving thoughts unfinished. Also, use linking words like 'for instance' or 'in addition' to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

例: Yes, definitely. In my country, people often send flowers to express their feelings, especially in romantic relationships. For instance, boyfriends usually give roses to their girlfriends to show affection. In addition, flowers are commonly sent on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries.

× Do you love flowers? Yes, I really love flowers because they can really bring, uh, my mood up whenever I see them, and they're vibrant colors are very refreshing to my eyes, and I find that looking at flowers helped me feel more relaxed and uplifted.

✓ Do you love flowers? Yes, I really love flowers because they can really bring, uh, my mood up whenever I see them, and their vibrant colors are very refreshing to my eyes, and I find that looking at flowers helps me feel more relaxed and uplifted.

The pronoun 'they're' is a contraction of 'they are', which is incorrect here. The correct possessive pronoun is 'their' to indicate ownership of the colors by the flowers. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency with 'I find'.

× She enjoys cultivating a wide variety of flowers in our garden, which help her feel calm and happy.

✓ She enjoys cultivating a wide variety of flowers in our garden, which helps her feel calm and happy.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'a wide variety', which is singular, so the verb should be singular 'helps' to agree with the subject.

× My mom love gardening so she has planted many different types of flowers such as roses and lilies.

✓ My mom loves gardening so she has planted many different types of flowers such as roses and lilies.

The subject 'My mom' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' to agree in number.

× Besides that, flowers are also commonly sent on special occasions like birthdays or.

✓ Besides that, flowers are also commonly sent on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' without completing the list, which is a sentence structure error. Adding a complete item after 'or' completes the sentence properly.