Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點語法錯誤，例如 'flower' 應該用複數 'flowers'，且句子結構可以更自然。建議你直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話具體說明原因，避免重複。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they look beautiful and smell wonderful. I especially enjoy taking photos of them to capture their colors and shapes.

提案: 你的回答有語法和用詞錯誤，句子結構不清晰。建議你先直接回答問題，然後用連接詞組織句子，並用具體例子說明。

例: Yes, many girls I know love flowers. Even if they say they don't need them, they feel happy to receive flowers on special occasions or just as a surprise.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，句子不夠流暢。建議你用更自然的句子結構，並用連接詞使內容連貫。

例: There used to be many flowers where I live, but when my mom tried to grow some, they died quickly. So now, we rarely plant flowers at home.

提案: 回答內容豐富，但語法和用詞需要改進。建議你簡化句子，使用正確的時態和單複數形式，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: Yes, when I travel and see beautiful flowers, I always take photos of them. I like how the light and shadows make the flowers look even more adorable.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且句子結構不完整。建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞組織句子，說明具體情況。

例: People in my country don't often send flowers to each other. However, on special occasions like Chinese New Year or birthdays, it is common to give flowers as gifts.

× Yes, I like flower and I really like to take a picture of them.

✓ Yes, I like flowers and I really like to take pictures of them.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'them' which refers to multiple flowers.

× I think that they are very good in the picture and also I like the smell of the flower.

✓ I think that they look very good in pictures and also I like the smell of flowers.

'They' refers to multiple flowers, so 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'. Also, 'the flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer generally to flowers.

× I guess most of the girl like flowers like even we say that we don't need it but sometime it's really happy to receive the flower in some special day or even just the Gen. general or in a normal day that when we receive it we will love it and happy.

✓ I guess most of the girls like flowers. Even though we say that we don't need them, sometimes it's really nice to receive flowers on special days or even just generally on a normal day; when we receive them, we feel happy and love it.

'Girl' should be plural 'girls' to refer to most of them. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to flowers. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× The place where I live we used to have a lot of flowers but when my mom tried to grow them up the flower just dead.

✓ The place where I live used to have a lot of flowers, but when my mom tried to grow them, the flowers just died.

'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'them'. 'Dead' is an adjective; the correct past tense verb is 'died'.

× So now we are rarely to plant a flower.

✓ So now we rarely plant flowers.

'Rarely' is an adverb and should not be followed by 'to'. Also, 'a flower' should be plural 'flowers' to indicate general planting.

× Yes, when I travel to the other place and when I saw a flower which is looks beautiful, I would definitely take the picture of them because I think that umm they are adorable and I like the light or the shadow with the flower, so I will just take picture of them.

✓ Yes, when I travel to other places and when I see a flower that looks beautiful, I definitely take pictures of them because I think they are adorable. I like the light or the shadow with the flowers, so I just take pictures of them.

'The other place' should be 'other places' for generality. 'Saw' should be 'see' to match present tense. 'Which is looks' is incorrect; 'that looks' is correct. 'The picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'them'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Will just take' changed to 'just take' for habitual action.

× In my country we are not often to send a flower to each other 'cause maybe in some special day like Chinese New Year or they are going to celebrate for the birthday, they might buy some flower for each other.

✓ In my country, we do not often send flowers to each other because maybe on special days like Chinese New Year or birthdays, people might buy flowers for each other.

'Are not often to send' is incorrect; use 'do not often send'. 'A flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Celebrate for the birthday' should be 'birthdays'. 'Some flower' should be 'some flowers'. 'Cause' is informal; replaced with 'because'.