Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are very colorful and beautiful. I often take photos of them and share these pictures on social media to keep good memories.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意主谓一致和时态，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, my classmate loves flowers. He grows many kinds of flowers in his small garden because he finds their colors and shapes very inspiring. Also, as an art student, he often uses flowers as inspiration for his paintings.

提案: 表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达，注意语法和逻辑，避免重复和不必要的信息。

例: Actually, there are no flowers at my home because I have a cat. I am afraid that if I plant flowers, my cat might eat them and get sick, which would be expensive to treat.

提案: 回答较好，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意动词时态和单复数，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, definitely. I enjoy taking photos of flowers whenever I walk in the park or hike in the mountains. I like to capture their beauty and often share the photos on social media because it helps me connect with others who appreciate nature and makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，使用恰当的词汇和连接词。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other. It depends on the situation. For example, boys send roses to girls to show their love, and people send flowers to graves when someone has passed away.

× I realized it takes many photos on flowers because that the flowers really colorful and I wanna take it down and send it to the social media.

✓ I realized I take many photos of flowers because the flowers are really colorful and I want to take them and send them to social media.

动词后面需要用正确的介词和形式，'take photos on flowers' 应为 'take photos of flowers'，'wanna take it down' 应为 'want to take them'，因为flowers是复数。

× Is is a very good memorable thing.

✓ It is a very good memorable thing.

句首的 'Is is' 应为 'It is'，代词使用错误。

× The person I knows who really love flowers is my classmate.

✓ The person I know who really loves flowers is my classmate.

'I knows' 中 'knows' 应为 'know'，因为主语是第一人称单数；'who really love flowers' 中 'love' 应为 'loves'，因为主语是第三人称单数。

× He played many different kinds of flowers in his small garden because he's fine, their colors and shapes very inspiring.

✓ He plants many different kinds of flowers in his small garden because he finds their colors and shapes very inspiring.

'played' 应为 'plants'，动词时态和词义错误；'he's fine' 应为 'he finds'，动词拼写错误。

× At the same time, he's learning arts and he often use the beauty of flowers as a source of creativity for his painting.

✓ At the same time, he's learning arts and he often uses the beauty of flowers as a source of creativity for his painting.

'he often use' 中动词应为第三人称单数形式 'uses'。

× Actually, there are no flowers where I live because I have keeping the pets.

✓ Actually, there are no flowers where I live because I keep pets.

'I have keeping the pets' 语法错误，应为 'I keep pets'。

× It's a cat.

✓ I have a cat.

前句提到 'pets'，此处应明确表示拥有一只猫，且句子结构更完整。

× If I plant many flowers, I think it's harmful for it because I'm very afraid that it will eat it, that I need to send it to the hospital.

✓ If I plant many flowers, I think it will be harmful to it because I'm very afraid that it will eat them and I will need to send it to the hospital.

代词使用不当，'it's harmful for it' 应为 'it will be harmful to it'，'eat it' 应为 'eat them' 指花，句子连接不顺畅。

× I really enjoyed taking photos of flowers in my daily life whenever I go walk in the park or hiking the mountains.

✓ I really enjoy taking photos of flowers in my daily life whenever I go for a walk in the park or hike in the mountains.

时态应与问题匹配，'enjoyed' 改为 'enjoy'；'go walk' 应为 'go for a walk'；'hiking' 应为 'hike'。

× I like to capture the beauty to of different flowers and often share these photos on social media because it allow me to connect with others who appreciated nature and also can make me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I like to capture the beauty of different flowers and often share these photos on social media because it allows me to connect with others who appreciate nature and also makes me feel happy and relaxed.

'beauty to of' 应为 'beauty of'；'it allow' 应为 'it allows'；'who appreciated' 应为 'who appreciate'；'can make' 应为 'makes'，主谓一致错误。

× Yes that is also but the flowers read people send it to each other.

✓ Yes, that is true, but people really send flowers to each other.

句子结构混乱，'flowers read people send it' 不通顺，应调整为 'people really send flowers'。

× Like some boys shows their love for the girls and they will send the Rose and some things like people died and in his tomb people send another flowers.

✓ For example, some boys show their love for girls by sending roses, and in cases like when people die, others send flowers to their tombs.

'boys shows' 应为 'boys show'；'the Rose' 应为复数 'roses'；'people died' 应为 'people die'；'another flowers' 应为 'other flowers'，代词和名词复数错误。