Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“they have a wonderful smile”不符合语境，且句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇描述花的美丽。

例: Yes, I really like flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. In my city, I can see many flowers blooming along the streets, which makes the environment very pleasant.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“my mom is very enjoy the flowers”应为“enjoys flowers”。表达不够连贯，缺少连接词，且细节描述不够具体。建议注意动词形式，使用连接词，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers very much. She often buys fresh flowers to decorate our home, which makes me feel happy and comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“you can see flower anywhere”应为“flowers anywhere”，且“happy and enjoyable”搭配不当。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: Yes, there are many flowers along the roads in my city. They are colorful and beautiful, and seeing them always makes me feel happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“taking photo”应为“taking photos”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和复数形式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of flowers because they are so beautiful and colorful. Whenever I see them, I feel happy and like to capture their beauty with my camera.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但句子结构稍显简单，且有重复词汇“in the in their birthday”。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并避免重复。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to their friends and parents on birthdays or other special occasions to express their love and appreciation.

× I can see many flower around the our.

✓ I can see many flowers around us.

这里flower应该用复数形式flowers，因为前面有many修饰，表示数量多。并且around the our表达不正确，应该用around us表示我们周围。

× my mom is very enjoy the flowers.

✓ my mom really enjoys the flowers.

enjoy是动词，不能用very修饰，应该用副词really修饰动词enjoy，并且主语是第三人称单数mom，动词要加s变成enjoys。

× She always buys some flowers on our home and use them to our home.

✓ She always buys some flowers for our home and uses them in our home.

buy flowers的介词应该用for表示买给某处，use的介词用in表示在某处使用。

× I feel very happy and enjoyable.

✓ I feel very happy and enjoy it.

feel后面接形容词happy表示感受，enjoyable是形容词，意思是令人愉快的，不适合用来描述自己的感受，应该用动词enjoy。

× There are many flowers around the road and you can see flower anywhere.

✓ There are many flowers around the road and you can see flowers anywhere.

flower应使用复数flowers，因为表示泛指多个花。

× There are many beautiful and colorful.

✓ There are many beautiful and colorful flowers.

句子缺少名词作主语补足，beautiful and colorful是形容词，需修饰flowers。

× I feel very umm, happy and enjoyable.

✓ I feel very happy and enjoy it.

同上，enjoyable不适合用来描述自己的感受，应该用动词enjoy。

× I'm really into taking photo of flowers because they are very beautiful and colorful.

✓ I'm really into taking photos of flowers because they are very beautiful and colorful.

photo应使用复数photos，因为表示多张照片。

× I even, uh, took photo with them with all these flowers.

✓ I even, uh, took photos of them with all these flowers.

take photo of表示拍摄某物，take photo with表示和某人合影，这里应使用take photos of them。

× they send flowers to their friends and parents in the in their birthday or some meaningful day which can show their love.

✓ they send flowers to their friends and parents on their birthday or some meaningful day which can show their love.

表示在某一天用介词on，而不是in。