Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you love flowers?
受験者
Of course I love flowers. I'm obsessed with with flowers about my childhood. I did never received any flowers from my mother or my father. So after I grow up, uh, in my birthday every year I will buy in, I will buy flowers for myself.
試験官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
受験者
Uh, my mother, she's uh, she's a flower freak. She loves flowers more than her life, more than her life. So umm, when some festivals coming, I will buy some flowers for her. She loves red rose.
試験官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
受験者
Oh no, there are any flowers around my house because, you know, our country is not a very romantic country. So as my hometown, so, uh, we only have flowers shop, but we, there are not any flowers around my areas where I'm living.
試験官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
受験者
Of course, I have to command photos of flowers in my daily life because I like buying flowers. When I got some spare time, I will go to flower shops, every different flower shops to buy some kinds of flowers like a rose. Like like any other flowers, I love them.
試験官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
受験者
Of course not, that is one of the reasons why I don't love my country. It's not very romantic so, but I I always send flowers to my best friends and my boyfriend a long time ago. I think this little surprises.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的正确使用。
例: Yes, I love flowers very much. Since I never received flowers from my parents during my childhood, I started buying flowers for myself every birthday after I grew up.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有重复表达，且部分句子不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词和时态的正确使用。
例: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She is very passionate about them, so I often buy red roses for her during festivals.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的否定结构，简化句子，并更清楚地描述情况。
例: No, there are not many flowers around my house. Our country is not very romantic, and although there are flower shops, flowers are rare in my neighborhood.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有用词错误和重复，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确的词汇，避免重复，并使句子更简洁流畅。
例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy buying them. In my spare time, I visit different flower shops to buy various kinds of flowers, such as roses.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中表达情绪过于强烈且有语法错误。建议保持客观，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和连贯性。
例: Not many people in my country send flowers often, which I find a bit disappointing. However, I like to send flowers to my best friends and my boyfriend as a small surprise.
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