Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“as a superstitious girl”表达不清晰，且句子结构不够流畅。建议简化表达，直接说明喜欢红玫瑰的原因，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially red roses because I believe they bring good luck. Their vibrant color always cheers me up.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“busy with busy with”和“corrective flowers”不合适。建议使用简单明了的句子表达，并提供具体例子。

例: Not many people around me love flowers because they are busy with studying and work, so they don't have enough time to take care of flowers.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“when appreciate them”缺少主语，且表达可以更流畅。建议注意语法完整性，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, many people in my community plant colorful flowers. I feel delighted when I appreciate them because they help me forget the day's worries.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“take picture”应为“take pictures”，且“garrulous”用词不当。建议使用恰当词汇描述花的美丽，并注意单复数和主谓一致。

例: Yes, I often take pictures of flowers. I like to use the blue sky as a background because it makes the colorful flowers look very beautiful.

提案: 回答中“a pouch of flowers”表达不准确，应为“a bunch of flowers”。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充更多细节。

例: On special occasions like Mother's Day, people usually send a bunch of flowers to their mothers to show their gratitude.

× Maybe not most of people around me, my peers who are busy with busy with studying and working, they don't have sufficiency time to corrective flowers.

✓ Maybe not most of the people around me, my peers who are busy with studying and working, they don't have sufficient time to take care of flowers.

“most of people”应为“most of the people”，因为“people”是复数名词，前面需要定冠词“the”。“sufficiency time”应为“sufficient time”，因为“sufficient”是形容词，修饰名词“time”。“corrective flowers”用词错误，应为“take care of flowers”，表示照顾花。

× Maybe not most of people around me, my peers who are busy with busy with studying and working, they don't have sufficiency time to corrective flowers.

✓ Maybe not most of the people around me, my peers who are busy with studying and working, they don't have sufficient time to take care of flowers.

“busy with busy with”重复，应去掉一个“busy with”。“busy with studying and working”中“studying”和“working”作为动名词形式，表示正在进行的活动，使用正确。

× Sure, many people plant flowers with different colors in my community. I feel totally delighted when appreciate them and forget the whole day's sorrow.

✓ Sure, many people plant flowers with different colors in my community. I feel totally delighted when I appreciate them and forget the whole day's sorrow.

“when appreciate them”缺少主语，应为“when I appreciate them”。

× Of course, I think I often take picture of flowers.

✓ Of course, I think I often take pictures of flowers.

“take picture”应为“take pictures”，因为“pictures”是复数，表示多张照片。

× The blue sky and the various colorful flowers looks very garrulous.

✓ The blue sky and the various colorful flowers look very garrulous.

主语是复数“the blue sky and the various colorful flowers”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“look”，而不是“looks”。

× The blue sky and the various colorful flowers looks very garrulous.

✓ The blue sky and the various colorful flowers look very beautiful.

“garrulous”意为“多嘴的，喋喋不休的”，用来形容花和天空不合适，应使用“beautiful”等形容词。

× If there is a special day, such as Mothers Day, children will send a pouch of flowers to their mothers in order to extend their gratitude.

✓ If there is a special day, such as Mother's Day, children will send a bunch of flowers to their mothers in order to express their gratitude.

“Mothers Day”应为“Mother's Day”，表示母亲节。 “a pouch of flowers”用词错误，应为“a bunch of flowers”，表示一束花。 “extend their gratitude”应为“express their gratitude”，表示表达感激。