Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you love flowers?
受験者
I adore flowers. I really like spring because of that. In spring, there's a blooming season when everything around you is blooming and there's a lot of colors and a lot of flowers. So yeah, I like flowers very much.
試験官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
受験者
Yeah, I think a lot of girls like flowers and things that I can say I can name you like at least 10 people who like flowers. Also, my grandma is a big fan of them. She has a whole garden filled with flowers. She always taking care of them and doing something with flowers.
試験官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
受験者
I won't say there's a lot of flowers in my town, but in my house there's always like at least one bucket of flowers because my mother always buys one whenever she sees one. Since that I can say it like I always see avocado flowers on my wing.
試験官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
受験者
Yes, I like taking photos and especially flowers. I think it really improves the photo if the flowers have vibrant colors because it brings more of emotion to the father. So there's a lot of flower photos in my gallery.
試験官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
受験者
I won't say it's like a tradition, but we have a day that's called Women's Day and men always bite tulips for their woman like mother, girlfriend, grandmother and other. So it's not really a tradition but a good thing to do.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ваша відповідь природна, але трохи надто довга і повторюється. Спробуйте бути більш лаконічним і уникати зайвих повторів, використовуючи зв'язки для кращої логіки.
例: Yes, I love flowers, especially in spring when many plants bloom and add vibrant colors to the environment.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ваша відповідь містить деякі граматичні помилки і не дуже чітка. Спробуйте використовувати правильні часи і структуру речень, а також зв'язки для кращої логіки.
例: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For example, my grandmother has a large garden and she takes great care of her flowers every day.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ваша відповідь містить деякі незрозумілі фрази і граматичні помилки. Спробуйте бути більш чітким і уникати слів, які не мають сенсу в контексті.
例: There are not many flowers in my town, but at home we always have fresh flowers because my mother buys them regularly.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: Ваша відповідь містить помилки в словах і граматиці. Слідкуйте за правильним вживанням слів і намагайтеся робити речення більш чіткими і логічними.
例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because their vibrant colors add emotion and beauty to the pictures. Many of my photos feature flowers.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ваша відповідь містить помилки в словах і граматиці, а також деякі неточності. Спробуйте використовувати правильні слова і структуру речень для кращого розуміння.
例: Although sending flowers is not a strong tradition, on Women's Day men often give tulips to women such as their mothers, girlfriends, and grandmothers as a kind gesture.
文法
× She always taking care of them and doing something with flowers.
✓ She is always taking care of them and doing something with flowers.
The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'is' needed for the present continuous tense. The phrase 'always taking care' indicates a habitual action in present continuous, so 'is' should be added before 'always'.
× Since that I can say it like I always see avocado flowers on my wing.
✓ Because of that, I can say I always see avocado flowers on my wing.
The phrase 'Since that' is incorrect here; 'Because of that' is the proper prepositional phrase to indicate cause. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.
× I always see avocado flowers on my wing.
✓ I always see avocado flowers on my balcony.
The word 'wing' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition and noun should be 'on my balcony' or 'on my window sill' to indicate a place where flowers can be seen or grown.
× men always bite tulips for their woman like mother, girlfriend, grandmother and other.
✓ men always buy tulips for the women in their lives like their mother, girlfriend, grandmother, and others.
The verb 'bite' is incorrect; it should be 'buy'. Also, 'their woman' is incorrect; it should be 'the women in their lives' or 'their women'. The list should include possessive pronouns for clarity, and 'other' should be plural 'others'.
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