Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve sentence coherence. For example, use plural forms correctly and connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they are colorful and essential for decorating our environment. For instance, a street in Taipei is famous for its beautiful flowers, which often attract tourists to take photos.

提案: Focus on correct word forms and sentence structure. For example, use 'effort' instead of 'efforts' in this context, and 'stands out' instead of 'standouts'. Also, try to link ideas more naturally.

例: Yes, my grandfather really likes flowers and puts a lot of effort into planting and taking care of them. Because of his enthusiasm for gardening, our house stands out in the neighborhood.

提案: Improve subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition. For example, use 'the government takes care' and avoid repeating 'planted there'. Also, use linking words to make the answer more coherent.

例: Yes, the streets in Taipei are well decorated with plants. Not only does the government take care of them, but citizens also contribute by planting flowers in their neighborhoods. For example, One Street in Taipei is famous for its beautiful flowers, which attract many tourists.

提案: Pay attention to article usage and plural forms. For example, say 'photos of flowers' instead of 'photos of flower'. Also, try to connect ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'thanks to the advanced AI today'.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of flowers, and sometimes I upload them to an AI app to identify the species.

提案: Improve sentence flow and use plural forms correctly. For example, say 'different flowers hold different good meanings'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially during celebrations like weddings, because different flowers hold different good meanings. Therefore, I think flowers are a thoughtful gift that can express our wishes.

× Yes, I love flowers because they are colorful and it's very essential for decorating our environments.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they are colorful and it is very essential for decorating our environment.

The phrase 'it's very essential' should be 'it is very essential' for formal correctness, and 'environments' should be singular 'environment' because it refers to the general surroundings, not multiple distinct environments.

× For example, one of the streets in Taipei is quite famous for the flower planted there and it often attract tourists to take photo.

✓ For example, one of the streets in Taipei is quite famous for the flowers planted there and it often attracts tourists to take photos.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'attracts' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to the street. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because multiple flowers are planted, and 'photo' should be plural 'photos' as tourists take multiple pictures.

× my grandfather really likes flowers and puts a lot of efforts into planting and taking care of them.

✓ my grandfather really likes flowers and puts a lot of effort into planting and taking care of them.

'Effort' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'efforts' in this context.

× Thanks to his enthusiasm of gardening, he really makes my house standouts in their neighborhood.

✓ Thanks to his enthusiasm for gardening, he really makes my house stand out in the neighborhood.

'Enthusiasm of gardening' should be 'enthusiasm for gardening'. 'Standouts' is incorrect; the verb phrase is 'stand out'. Also, 'their neighborhood' should be 'the neighborhood' to refer to the area around the house.

× Not only the government take care of them, but the citizens also contribute by planting flowers in their neighborhood.

✓ Not only does the government take care of them, but the citizens also contribute by planting flowers in their neighborhood.

The subject 'government' is singular, so the verb should be 'does take care' to agree. The sentence requires inversion after 'Not only' for correct grammar.

× Sometimes I also upload the photos of flower to identify it.

✓ Sometimes I also upload photos of flowers to identify them.

'Photos of flower' should be plural 'photos of flowers' because multiple flowers are involved. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'flowers'.