Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answerは自然ですが、文法ミスと冗長な表現があります。例えば、「I got feeling something like special」は不自然で、「I feel special」などに直すべきです。また、文を5文以内にまとめ、より明確に答えましょう。

例: Yes, I love flowers. I feel special when my partner gives me a bouquet. Flowers brighten my day and make me happy.

提案: 文のつながりが不自然で、文法ミスがあります。例えば、「She sometimes. Put flowers...」は不完全な文です。接続詞を使い、文をつなげてください。

例: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She sometimes puts flowers on the shelf and at the entrance of the house to decorate.

提案: 答えが断片的で、文が短すぎて意味が伝わりにくいです。文をつなげて、具体的に説明しましょう。

例: I don't think there are many flowers around, but there are a few, like hydrangeas and broom plants, in front of my house.

提案: 文が断片的で、文法ミスがあります。接続詞を使い、文をつなげて自然な表現にしましょう。

例: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially seasonal ones, and I keep them on my Instagram.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、繰り返しがあり、文法ミスもあります。より自然で簡潔な表現にしましょう。

例: In my country, people often send flowers, especially carnations, to their mothers on Mother's Day. It is a common tradition.

× I got feeling something like special when my partner give me some flower bouquet.

✓ I got a feeling something special when my partner gave me a flower bouquet.

The phrase 'got feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'got a feeling' to indicate a sensation. 'Give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match 'got'. Also, 'some flower bouquet' should be 'a flower bouquet' because 'bouquet' is singular and countable. Use 'something special' instead of 'something like special' for correct expression.

× I got feeling something like special when my partner give me some flower bouquet.

✓ I got a feeling something special when my partner gave me a flower bouquet.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular past tense 'gave' to agree with the singular subject 'my partner' and past tense context.

× She sometimes. Put flowers on the shelf and the entrance of the house.

✓ She sometimes puts flowers on the shelf and at the entrance of the house.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Sometimes' should be followed by the verb 'puts' without a period. Also, 'put' should be 'puts' for third person singular present tense. Preposition 'at' is needed before 'the entrance'.

× I don't think so, but few flowers like hydrangea. Brooms. In the front of my house.

✓ I don't think so, but there are a few flowers like hydrangeas and brooms in front of my house.

'Few' without 'a' implies almost none; 'a few' means some. 'Hydrangea' and 'brooms' should be plural as they refer to types of flowers. 'In the front of my house' should be 'in front of my house' without 'the'.

× Yeah, I sometimes. Take photos of flowers specially I enjoy the seasonal flowers and. And keep it on my Instagram.

✓ Yeah, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially seasonal flowers, and keep them on my Instagram.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect punctuation. 'Sometimes' should not be followed by a period. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'And keep it' should be 'and keep them' to refer to photos (plural). The sentence should be combined properly.

× People in my country send flowers when a Mother's Day.

✓ People in my country send flowers on Mother's Day.

'When a Mother's Day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for days and holidays. Also, 'a' is unnecessary before 'Mother's Day'.

× When it's a Mother's Day, they send some carnation to their mother.

✓ When it's Mother's Day, they send carnations to their mothers.

'A' before 'Mother's Day' is unnecessary. 'Carnation' should be plural 'carnations' as they usually send multiple flowers. 'Their mother' should be 'their mothers' to agree with plural 'they'.