Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用正确的词汇表达对花的喜爱，并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and color to the environment, which instantly lifts my mood. For example, I especially enjoy roses and lilies for their pleasant fragrance and elegant appearance.

提案: 回答中存在性别代词混淆和语法错误，表达不完整。建议明确主语，使用正确的代词和时态，补充具体细节使回答完整。

例: Yes, I have a close friend who absolutely loves flowers. He enjoys gardening and often spends his weekends planting different types of flowers in his backyard because he finds it relaxing and rewarding. For example, he recently planted tulips and daisies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，词汇使用不准确。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，补充具体细节，使回答更连贯完整。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and botanical gardens. For example, during spring, the streets are filled with colorful blossoms like roses and tulips, which really brighten up the neighborhoods.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，词汇使用不当。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和语法，明确表达拍摄花朵的原因和场景。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I find their colors and shapes very beautiful. For example, when I walk in the park or visit gardens, I like capturing different kinds of flowers to appreciate their natural beauty and share the photos with my friends. It also helps me relax.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不完整。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，补充具体场合和情感表达，使回答更完整自然。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. Flowers are considered a thoughtful and beautiful way to express emotions like love or sympathy.

× And yes I do, I do love flowers and she ate beauty and color to any environmental on which instantly lights my mood.

✓ And yes I do, I do love flowers and they add beauty and color to any environment which instantly lifts my mood.

原句中'she ate'应为'they add'，因为主语是flowers（复数），动词应使用复数形式。'environmental'应为名词'environment'。'lights'应为'lifts'，表示提升心情。

× For example, especially in dangerous and latest because of their plans and fragrance and elegant appearance.

✓ For example, especially in gardens and places because of their plants, fragrance, and elegant appearance.

原句中'dangerous and latest'不合适，应为'gardens and places'。'plans'应为'plants'。句子结构混乱，需要调整使其通顺。

× Yes, I know a close friend who absolutely love flowers.

✓ Yes, I know a close friend who absolutely loves flowers.

主语是单数friend，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'loves'。

× He enjoy gardening and often spending her on weekend and planting different type of flowers in here on backyard because he is.

✓ He enjoys gardening and often spends his weekends planting different types of flowers in his backyard because he finds it relaxing.

动词应与主语一致，'enjoy'改为'enjoys'，'spending'改为'spends'，'her'改为'his'，'type'改为'types'，'here on backyard'改为'his backyard'。句子不完整，补充完整。

× She finds it relaxing and rewarding. For example, she's recently.

✓ She finds it relaxing and rewarding. For example, she has recently started a new garden.

原句不完整，'she's recently'后缺少内容，需补充完整句子。

× Yet there are quite a lot of flowers where I live, especially in public parks and recital garden umm.

✓ Yes, there are quite a lot of flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens.

'Yet'用法不当，应为'Yes'。'recital garden'应为'residential gardens'。

× For example during spring the streets are light with colorful blossom like rose and tallops which really bring up the neighborhoods I think the abundance of.

✓ For example, during spring the streets are lined with colorful blossoms like roses and tulips which really brighten up the neighborhoods.

'light with'应为'lined with'，'blossom'应为复数'blossoms'，'rose'和'tallops'应为复数'roses'和'tulips'，'bring up'应为'brighten up'。句子末尾不完整，已调整。

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find her colors and shapes a very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their colors and shapes very beautiful.

'her'指代错误，应为'their'，因为flowers是复数。'a very beautiful'结构错误，应为'very beautiful'。

× For example, when I walk in the park or with gardens, I like computer.

✓ For example, when I walk in the park or in gardens, I like to take photos.

'with gardens'应为'in gardens'，'I like computer'不通顺，应为'I like to take photos'。

× I like computing different kinds of flower to appreciate their natural beautiful and share them with my friend.

✓ I like capturing different kinds of flowers to appreciate their natural beauty and share them with my friends.

'computing'用词错误，应为'capturing'或'taking photos of'。'flower'应为复数'flowers'。'beautiful'应为名词'beauty'。'friend'应为复数'friends'。

× It's also helps me relax.

✓ It also helps me relax.

'It's'是'it is'的缩写，后面不应接动词原形，正确用法是'It also helps me relax'。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special associations such as birthday, weddings and anniversary.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries.

'associations'应为'occasions'，'birthday'和'anniversary'应为复数形式。

× Flowers are considered a thoughtful and beautiful way to experience an emotion like LA on love or on semi patch for example.

✓ Flowers are considered a thoughtful and beautiful way to express emotions like love or sympathy, for example.

'experience an emotion'用法错误，应为'express emotions'。'LA on love or on semi patch'不通顺，改为'love or sympathy'。

× It is.

✓ It is.

该句不完整，建议补充完整内容。