Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy such as "a person who people love" which can be simplified.

例: Yes, I love flowers. Whenever I receive one, I feel appreciated because flowers symbolize love and respect.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and try to be more specific. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I believe many people love flowers, especially my cousin. She feels loved when she receives flowers because she sees them as a symbol of love.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow.

例: I live in a crowded city mostly filled with buildings, so there aren't many flowers around. However, there are some flower gardens in certain areas.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they help me relax. My university campus has many beautiful flowers, so I enjoy capturing them.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but slightly repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use varied vocabulary to make your answer more natural.

例: Yes, sending flowers is common in my country, especially during weddings and birthdays. Flowers are a traditional way to express love, respect, and care.

× Yes I do, Whenever I receive a flower from someone I feel really loving and respected because I think a flower is a symbol of love to show respect and care for a person who people love.

✓ Yes I do. Whenever I receive a flower from someone I feel really loved and respected because I think a flower is a symbol of love to show respect and care for a person who people love.

The word 'loving' is a present participle describing an action, but here the intended meaning is a feeling experienced by the student, so the past participle 'loved' should be used to express that feeling.

× She really feel loved when someone give her flowers because she thinks that it is the symbol of love.

✓ She really feels loved when someone gives her flowers because she thinks that it is the symbol of love.

In the present simple tense, the third person singular subject 'She' requires the verbs 'feel' and 'give' to be conjugated as 'feels' and 'gives' respectively to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I live in a very crowded city where there are only buildings around the places, so there is no flower gardens or flowers in the place where I live.

✓ I live in a very crowded city where there are only buildings around the places, so there are no flower gardens or flowers in the place where I live.

The phrase 'no flower gardens' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number with the plural subject.

× Yes, I do take photos of flowers whenever I see them because it allows me to refresh my mind whenever I see a flower.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of flowers whenever I see them because they allow me to refresh my mind whenever I see a flower.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'photos of flowers', which is plural, so the plural pronoun 'they' should be used to maintain pronoun-antecedent agreement.

× And I often take photos of flowers when I go to my university because my university has plenty of those these.

✓ And I often take photos of flowers when I go to my university because my university has plenty of those.

The phrase 'those these' is redundant and incorrect; only one demonstrative pronoun should be used. 'Those' is appropriate here to refer to flowers previously mentioned.