Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, improve sentence structure for natural flow and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize love and respect. Whenever someone gives me a flower, I feel appreciated and cared for.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid vague statements like 'I think everyone loves flowers' and focus on the specific person you know.

例: Yes, my cousin loves flowers. She feels very happy when someone gives her flowers because she believes they represent love.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and try to be more concise.

例: I live in a crowded city filled with buildings, so there aren't many flowers around. However, there are some flower gardens in certain areas.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence clarity. Also, use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they help me relax. For example, at my university, there are many beautiful flowers that I like to photograph.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant with good content. To improve, try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to express love and respect, especially during weddings and birthdays. This tradition symbolizes care and affection.

× Yes I do, Whenever I receive a flower from someone I feel really loving and respected because I think a flower is a symbol of love to show respect and care for a person who people love.

✓ Yes I do. Whenever I receive a flower from someone I feel really loved and respected because I think a flower is a symbol of love to show respect and care for a person who people love.

The word 'loving' is a present participle that describes someone who shows love, not someone who feels love. The correct adjective to describe the feeling is 'loved'. Using 'loved' correctly expresses the feeling of being cared for.

× She really feel loved when someone give her flowers because she thinks that it is the symbol of love.

✓ She really feels loved when someone gives her flowers because she thinks that it is the symbol of love.

The subject 'She' is third person singular, so the verbs 'feel' and 'give' must be conjugated as 'feels' and 'gives' to agree with the subject.

× I live in a very crowded city where there are only buildings around the places, so there is no flower gardens or flowers in the place where I live.

✓ I live in a very crowded city where there are only buildings around the places, so there are no flower gardens or flowers in the place where I live.

The phrase 'no flower gardens' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number with the plural noun.

× Yes, I do take photos of flowers whenever I see them because it allows me to refresh my mind whenever I see a flower.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of flowers whenever I see them because they allow me to refresh my mind whenever I see a flower.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'photos of flowers', which is plural. Therefore, the plural pronoun 'they' should be used to maintain agreement.

× And I often take photos of flowers when I go to my university because my university has plenty of those these.

✓ And I often take photos of flowers when I go to my university because my university has plenty of them.

The phrase 'those these' is incorrect and redundant. The correct pronoun to refer back to 'flowers' is 'them'.