Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (số nhiều), trả lời trực tiếp và mở rộng bằng 1–2 câu bổ sung với thông tin cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I love flowers. I especially like roses because of their fragrance and bright colours, which cheer me up at home.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp và sở hữu cách, tránh tiếng ừ ờ. Trả lời rõ ràng, nêu lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể về người đó để làm câu phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She grows many orchids and spends weekends tending to them, which makes our home look beautiful.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (a/an, số nhiều), cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, thêm thông tin cụ thể và dùng liên từ để giải thích (but/and).

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Although I live in a city, parks and balconies are full of colourful flowers, especially in spring.

提案: Tránh lặp từ, dùng số nhiều và thêm chi tiết về tần suất hoặc mục đích chụp để câu cụ thể hơn. Dùng liên từ nếu cần mở rộng.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. I usually photograph them during morning walks to capture the light and share the pictures on my social media.

提案: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và cách dùng động từ (send), tránh tiếng lắp và nói không rõ. Bổ sung ví dụ khi nào và vì sao người ta tặng hoa để làm câu cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, people often send flowers. For example, flowers are commonly given on birthdays, anniversaries and to express sympathy at funerals.

× I love flower.

✓ I love flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural after 'love' when referring to flowers in general. Use plural nouns for general preferences: 'I love flowers.' Suggestion: Add 's' for plural nouns when speaking about things in general.

× Yes I do, my mum's, uh, love flower.

✓ Yes I do. My mum loves flowers.

There are multiple issues but per the allowed list we correct singular/plural and related agreement: 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Also possessive contraction 'mum's' was misused and must be 'My mum' with verb 'loves' (subject-verb agreement addressed in another type but plural noun fixed here). Suggestion: Use 'flowers' for general plural and ensure subject is clear: 'My mum loves flowers.'

× Yes, yeah, I live in city, but there are a lot of flower.

✓ Yes, I live in the city, but there are a lot of flowers.

Two issues: English requires the definite article 'the' with 'city' when referring to the city where you live: 'the city'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking about many of them. Suggestion: Use 'the city' and plural 'flowers' for 'a lot of'.

× Yes I do, I usually take photos of flower in my daily life.

✓ Yes I do. I usually take photos of flowers in my daily life.

The noun after 'photos of' should be plural: 'flowers' rather than 'flower' when referring to multiple items in general. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'photos of' when referring to images of more than one item.

× Yes they do. Uh, we are often seeing flower to other.

✓ Yes, they do. Uh, we often give/send flowers to others.

Multiple errors: 'seeing' is the wrong verb; use 'give' or 'send'. 'flower' must be plural 'flowers'. 'to other' should be 'to others'. Also progressive 'are often seeing' is unnatural; use simple present 'often send' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'send' or 'give', plural 'flowers', and plural pronoun 'others': 'we often send flowers to others.'