Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且相关，但有语法错误、用词不准和冗余。注意时态（过去式）、单复数和搭配，句子可更简洁并使用连词自然衔接。可把细节具体化（比如具体年龄或花的用途）。

例: Yes, I love flowers. When I was a child I planted dozens of flowers in our yard, such as roses and sunflowers, because I enjoyed watching them grow.

提案: 内容清晰但有语法和表达问题：主谓一致（loves），形容词/副词用法（really adorable→they/it is really lovely），以及句子衔接不够。可以补充具体例子说明她喜欢的花或摆放位置。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers too. She buys a fresh bouquet every week to decorate our living room, which always brightens up the whole house.

提案: 回答含义明确，但语法和时态有误（live而不是 lived；there are），以及表达可更自然。用连接词使句子更流畅，并给出具体场景或季节性描写以丰富内容。

例: Yes, I live near a park that has many flowers and several ponds. Whenever I walk past it, especially in spring, the colorful blooms always make me feel happy and refreshed.

提案: 有用意但句子结构和措辞有错误（'with them in my firm'不通，时态不一致）。应用更自然的搭配（take photos/photograph; it lifts my spirits），并说明拍摄目的或场景以具体化。

例: Yes, I often take photos of colorful flowers because I find them beautiful. Taking pictures of them in my garden always lifts my spirits and helps me relax.

提案: 回答内容完整但有些措辞不自然（a bunch of bouquet, a girl, romanticism）。注意词汇搭配和句子连贯性，可更自然地表达习俗并补充其他场合。

例: Yes, people often give flowers, especially on Valentine's Day. Many men buy bouquets for their girlfriends, and flowers are commonly seen as a romantic gift; they are also given on birthdays and during celebrations.

× When I was young I plant a dozen of flowers, for example like roses, sunflowers in my yard.

✓ When I was young I planted a dozen flowers, for example roses and sunflowers, in my yard.

句中描述过去发生的动作，应使用过去时，所以将plant改为planted。此外，短语“a dozen of flowers”不自然，改为“a dozen flowers”。“for example like”重复且冗余，保留“for example”或使用“like”，这里改为“for example roses and sunflowers”以更自然地列举。整句时态与语序调整使表达更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, my mom also love flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom also loves flowers.

主语“my mom”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，使用loves而不是love。简洁的规则是第三人称单数现在时动词要加-s或-es。

× Every week she purchases a bunch of flowers to decorate our house. It really adorable.

✓ Every week she purchases a bunch of flowers to decorate our house. It is really adorable.

原句“It really adorable.”缺少系动词be，应为“It is really adorable.” 表示“这真可爱”。该错误属于形容词/副词使用中省略了必要的动词结构。建议在描述状态时注意加上be动词。

× Yes, I lived near a park where there a lot of flowers and ponds.

✓ Yes, I live near a park where there are a lot of flowers and ponds.

句子有两处问题：首先原本回答前句“I lived”与上下文问“Are there a lot of flowers where you live?”应使用现在时，改为“I live”。其次从句中“There a lot of flowers”缺少be动词，且主语为复数“a lot of flowers”，应使用“there are”。因此改为“where there are a lot of flowers and ponds”。

× Every time when I go past there I feel happy and excited.

✓ Every time I go past there, I feel happy and excited.

短语“Every time when”冗余，通常使用“Every time”或“When”。将其简化为“Every time I go past there,” 更自然。其余谓语时态正确。建议避免重复连接词以使句子更流畅。

× I photograph a lot of colorful flowers because I think they are really beautiful and with them in my firm it always lifted my spirits.

✓ I photograph a lot of colorful flowers because I think they are really beautiful, and having them in my home always lifts my spirits.

原句存在多个问题："with them in my firm"表达不明确且“firm”应为“home”或“house”；“with ... it always lifted my spirits”时态不一致，前半为现在时，后半不应使用过去时“lifted”。用“having them in my home”更自然，且用现在时“always lifts”。同时把并列句用and连接并调整语序。建议注意动名词结构（having）来表示“拥有它们”以及时态一致性。

× Especially in Valentine's Day, men will purchase a bunch of bouquet to send to a girl, maybe their girlfriend, as a gift.

✓ Especially on Valentine's Day, men will purchase a bouquet to send to a girl, maybe their girlfriend, as a gift.

固定搭配为“on Valentine's Day”而非“in”。“a bunch of bouquet”是冗余且错误的搭配，应该使用“a bouquet”或“a bunch of flowers”。此外“purchase a bouquet to send to a girl”更简洁自然。建议记住常用节日介词（on）以及花束的正确表达方式。

× Because flowers symbolize a sense of romanticism.

✓ Because flowers symbolize romance.

“a sense of romanticism”表达冗长且不自然。直接用名词“romance”更地道，或用“a sense of romance”。建议使用简洁、常用的搭配表达抽象概念。