Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarifica y organiza la respuesta: comienza con una frase directa que responda la pregunta y luego añade una razón y un ejemplo concreto. Evita palabras innecesarias y errores gramaticales (por ejemplo, usa 'I love flowers' y 'roses' en plural). Mantén el límite de 1–3 oraciones si es posible.

例: Yes, I love flowers. I especially like roses because they smell nice and my boyfriend often gives me roses on special occasions.

提案: Responde directamente en presente y añade un detalle específico: usa 'loves' en lugar de 'loved' y explica qué plantas le gustan a tu mamá. Mantén la estructura: respuesta + detalle. Evita errores de concordancia.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers and plants. She especially enjoys orchids and spends a lot of time caring for them in our home.

提案: Organiza la respuesta para que sea clara: responde primero a la pregunta y luego da ejemplos específicos. Corrige errores de vocabulario ('Azores' -> 'azaleas'?) y gramática ('my mom has many plants and flowers'). Usa un par de ejemplos concretos.

例: Yes, there are many flowers near my home. My mother has a large garden with azaleas and roses, which bloom in spring.

提案: Haz la respuesta más clara y coherente: contesta directamente (yes/no), añade cuándo o dónde y describe brevemente. Evita frases rotas y traducciones literales. Usa conectores simples para enlazar ideas.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I have free time. For example, I recently photographed sunflowers in the Valle de Los Chillos because they were very beautiful.

提案: Da una respuesta más segura y añade un breve detalle: responde claramente ('Yes, people often send flowers') y menciona ocasiones específicas con la gramática correcta ('on special occasions, such as...').

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially on special occasions such as Valentine's Day and birthdays.

× Jess I love the flowers and because I like it or also the Rose and my boyfriend always give me rose.

✓ Jess, I love flowers because I like them. I also like roses and my boyfriend always gives me roses.

The student used incorrect pronouns and singular/plural forms. 'the flowers' should be general 'flowers' and pronoun 'it' must agree with plural noun 'flowers' -> 'them'. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' when speaking generally. 'my boyfriend always give' needs third person singular verb 'gives'. Use commas to separate vocative 'Jess'. Suggestion: match pronouns to noun number, use plural for general references, and use third person singular -s for he/she verbs.

× Yes, my mom loved the flowers and all plant.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers and all plants.

The student used past tense 'loved' although the question asks about a current habit; present tense 'loves' is appropriate. 'all plant' is singular but should be plural 'all plants' to match the general meaning. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual states and make nouns plural when referring generally.

× Yes my mom, yes my mom have very plans and flowers for example her Azores and rose.

✓ Yes, my mom has many plants and flowers; for example, she has azaleas and roses.

There is subject-verb disagreement: 'my mom have' should be 'my mom has' (third person singular). 'very plans' is incorrect word choice and should be 'many plants'. 'Azores' appears to be a misspelling of 'azaleas' or 'Açores' (the islands) — context indicates 'azaleas' (a flower). 'rose' should be plural 'roses'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use correct plural nouns; check vocabulary spelling.

× Yes, I'm be Jess. I'm busy that one place of sunflowers.

✓ Yes, I'm Jess. I'm busy. I went to a place with sunflowers.

'I'm be Jess' mixes present continuous and base verb; correct is 'I'm Jess'. 'I'm busy that one place of sunflowers' is ungrammatical: if the student meant they were busy or that they visited a place, use separate sentences. If describing a past visit, use past simple 'I went to a place with sunflowers.' If describing current state, say 'I'm busy; there's a place with sunflowers.' Suggestion: avoid combining forms like 'I'm be'; choose correct verb form and break ideas into clear sentences.

× Sunflowers in the Valle de Los Chillios and very beautiful and very picture.

✓ The sunflowers in the Valle de Los Chillios are very beautiful and make great pictures.

The sentence lacks a verb 'are' for 'sunflowers' and misuses 'very picture'. Use 'are very beautiful' and a phrase like 'make great pictures' or 'are very photogenic'. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' for descriptions and choose appropriate nouns/phrases for intended meaning.

× MMM maybe and also in a special occasions, for example Valentine's Day or birthday.

✓ Maybe, and also on special occasions, for example Valentine's Day or birthdays.

'in a special occasions' mixes singular and plural and wrong preposition. Use modal-like hedging 'Maybe' alone. Use preposition 'on' with days and occasions: 'on special occasions' and plural 'birthdays' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'on' for days/occasions, match singular/plural, and keep hedging concise.