Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, trật tự từ và phát âm. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ phù hợp và không quá 5 câu. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi như "very love" → "love" hoặc "really love", số nhiều của "flower" → "flowers", và dùng giới từ đúng (give flowers to my mom and friends).

例: Yes, I really love flowers because I think they are beautiful and come in many colours. I often give flowers to my mother and my friends on special occasions, which always makes them happy.

提案: Cần dùng thì và cấu trúc tự nhiên (Ví dụ: "My mother loves flowers."). Trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể về thói quen. Chú ý số nhiều, giới từ và thứ tự từ; tránh câu rời rạc, dùng mệnh đề liên kết như "so" hoặc "and".

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. During holidays and festivals she often buys flowers to decorate the house, and sometimes she gives me a bouquet as well.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại rất khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời đơn giản, trực tiếp nêu địa điểm có nhiều hoa, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với từ vựng chính xác. Tránh câu không liên quan và những cụm từ là xúc phạm hoặc không đúng (ví dụ "doing suicide").

例: Yes, there are many flowers in the local park. The city plants seasonal flowers in public areas to make the environment more pleasant for residents.

提案: Cần dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng và câu ngắn gọn (1–3 câu). Sửa ngữ pháp: "love flowers", "when I see any flowers on my street" → "when I see flowers on the street"; dùng liên từ hợp lý và nêu mục đích chụp ảnh cụ thể.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love their colours and shapes. If I see a nice flower on the street, I take a picture to remember it and sometimes post it online.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và dùng danh từ số nhiều "flowers". Sử dụng cụm từ chính xác: "on special occasions" hoặc "for birthdays and events". Thêm lý do ngắn gọn để làm rõ câu trả lời và tránh câu dang dở.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions, such as birthdays and festivals. They do this because flowers are considered a beautiful and thoughtful gift.

× Yes I very love flower I find it very beautiful and and many colored.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers. I find them very beautiful and colorful.

The student used 'very' incorrectly before the verb 'love' (should use an adverb like 'really') and used singular 'flower' instead of plural 'flowers'. 'Many colored' is ungrammatical; use 'colorful' to describe appearance. Also 'and and' is a repetition. Suggestions: place 'really' before the verb, use plural nouns when talking generally, and use adjectives like 'colorful' to describe appearance.

× I often give flower from my mom's and my friends.

✓ I often give flowers to my mom and my friends.

The student used 'from' where the correct preposition is 'to' for the recipient of a gift. Also possessive 'mom's' is incorrect here; use 'my mom'. Suggestions: use 'give ... to someone' and plural 'flowers' for general gifts.

× This make them feel happy and.

✓ This makes them feel happy.

The verb 'make' does not agree with singular subject 'This' and there is an incomplete conjunction 'and' with no following clause. Suggestions: use third-person singular verb 'makes' and remove the dangling 'and' or complete the sentence.

× My mother would very love flower.

✓ My mother really loves flowers.

'Would very love' is incorrect; use present simple 'loves' for habitual actions. 'Very' should be 'really' as an adverb modifying 'loves', and 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Suggestions: use 'really loves' and plural nouns for general preferences.

× I know in holiday or a festival day my mother often buy flowers to decorate my house and give me flower wind I sat.

✓ I know that on holidays or festival days my mother often buys flowers to decorate the house and gives me flowers when I sit with her.

Multiple issues: missing 'that', wrong preposition 'in holiday' should be 'on holidays' or 'on festival days'; 'buy' should be third-person singular 'buys'; 'give me flower' needs plural 'flowers'; 'wind' is incorrect word, likely 'when' needed; sentence was fragmented. Suggestions: use 'on holidays', apply subject-verb agreement (buys, gives), pluralize 'flowers', and use 'when' to link clauses.

× The park which is a plat have many flower and cheat the government often change flowering change obey unseasoned to decorate park and creative environment for people doing suicide.

✓ The park, which is a plaza, has many flowers, and the government often changes the plants and seasons to decorate the park and create a pleasant environment for people.

Many problems: 'plat' likely 'plaza'; subject-verb agreement 'have' should be 'has' for 'park'; 'flower' plural 'flowers'; 'cheat the government' is incorrect phrase; 'change flowering change obey unseasoned' is garbled — interpreted as government changing planting/flowering by season. 'Creative environment for people doing suicide' is inappropriate and likely meant 'create a pleasant environment for people'. Suggestions: correct nouns (plaza), use singular/plural agreement, clarify government actions (changes plants/flowers by season), and avoid incorrect or harmful phrasing.

× Yes, because I really love flower, I find it very beautiful so when I see it any flower in my street I often take photo to remember and post on the Internet from my friend.

✓ Yes, because I really love flowers; I find them very beautiful, so when I see any flowers on my street I often take photos to remember them and post them on the Internet for my friends.

Issues: 'love flower' should be 'love flowers' (plural); 'it any flower' is incorrect order — use 'any flowers'; 'take photo' should be plural 'take photos' and include object 'them'; 'from my friend' should be 'for my friends' to indicate audience. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general references, correct word order ('any flowers on my street'), pluralize 'photos', and use 'for' to indicate intended recipients.

× Uh yes, in my country many people often give flower on special day shut at birthday or event because this very beautiful and.

✓ Yes, in my country many people often give flowers on special days such as birthdays or events because they are very beautiful.

Problems: 'give flower' should be 'give flowers' (plural); 'on special day' needs plural 'special days' or 'on a special day'; 'shut at' is meaningless and likely 'such as'; 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' in general statements; 'because this very beautiful and' is incomplete — use 'because they are very beautiful.' Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, replace 'shut at' with 'such as', and complete the clause using correct subject and verb ('they are').