Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially when taking notes during classes, because it helps me organize and summarize important points, making it easier to review later.

提案: Avoid repeating the examiner's question and focus on answering directly. Also, watch your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I enjoy writing fiction because it stimulates my imagination and helps me create unique stories. For example, I often develop interesting characters and plots that encourage me to think creatively.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use simple sentences to express your ideas effectively.

例: Yes, I often change what I write because new ideas come to my mind. When that happens, I jot them down and update my writing accordingly.

提案: Your answer is good but avoid starting sentences with fillers like 'So' or 'Like'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me feel more engaged and connected to the writing process. Moreover, it improves my focus and stimulates creativity, allowing ideas to flow naturally.

× Writing fiction also makes me more creative and productive and encouraged me to think outside the box and develop new ideas.

✓ Writing fiction also makes me more creative and productive and encourages me to think outside the box and develop new ideas.

The verb 'encouraged' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. Since the sentence is in the present tense, the verb should be in the present tense 'encourages' to agree with the subject 'Writing fiction'. This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

× I think yes, because The thing is, we're right.

✓ I think yes, because the thing is, we're right.

The phrase 'The thing is' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence. Also, the sentence is somewhat unclear and awkward. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, the capitalization is corrected here. Proper sentence structure requires correct capitalization and clarity.

× I write with change whenever I need to change it and there's an idea that just comes out of my mind, it will I suddenly gonna jot it down and that would change everything that I wrote down.

✓ I write with changes whenever I need to change it, and if there's an idea that just comes out of my mind, I will suddenly jot it down and that will change everything that I wrote down.

The original sentence has several issues: 'write with change' should be 'write with changes' (plural), 'it will I suddenly gonna jot it down' is ungrammatical and should be 'I will suddenly jot it down'. Also, 'would change' is changed to 'will change' to maintain consistency in tense. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I prefer handwriting than typing because when I write notes, essays, or even fiction by hand, I feel more engaged and connected to the process.

✓ So I prefer handwriting to typing because when I write notes, essays, or even fiction by hand, I feel more engaged and connected to the process.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the preposition 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. Using 'prefer handwriting to typing' is the correct form. This is a common prepositional error in English.