Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“finished authors”应为“finished tours”或“travel experiences”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简洁明了地表达写作的目的。

例: Yes, I write quite often, mainly travel tips. I like to record my travel experiences immediately after a trip so that I can remember important details.

提案: 回答中多次出现“ride”错误，应为“write”。建议注意拼写错误，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I like to write travel tips because I enjoy sharing my experiences with others. Usually, I write them right after a trip to keep the information fresh and useful.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法混乱，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time because as I grow older, my opinions and experiences will evolve.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子略显重复。建议使用连接词简化表达，使语言更自然流畅。

例: I prefer typing because it is convenient. I can check and edit my writing anytime and anywhere using my cell phone.

× I usually write some sorts of travel tips because I want to write down my finished authors immediately so that I can remember all the things I need to remember.

✓ I usually write some sorts of travel tips because I want to write down my finished articles immediately so that I can remember all the things I need to remember.

这里'sorts of'后面应该接可数名词复数，'authors'是'作者'的意思，语境中应为'articles'（文章）。这是单复数使用错误。

× I like to ride travel tips because I like to share my experience on the trip with others.

✓ I like to write travel tips because I like to share my experience on the trip with others.

这里'should be 'write'而不是'ride'，但根据题目只纠正语法问题，'ride'是拼写错误，不属于语法问题，故不改。

× I usually ride the travel tips as soon as I finish a trip because I want to keep this useful information.

✓ I usually write the travel tips as soon as I finish a trip because I want to keep this useful information.

同上，'ride'应为'write'，但属于拼写错误，不属于语法问题，故不改。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change someday because as as we are getting older the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not mature as I was young.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change someday because as we are getting older, the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not as mature as I was when I was young.

这里'would'表示假设，语境中应使用'will'表示将来肯定发生的事情，属于情态动词用法错误。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change someday because as as we are getting older the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not mature as I was young.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change someday because as we are getting older, the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not as mature as I was when I was young.

比较级结构中缺少'as'，应为'not as mature as I was when I was young'，这是形容词用法错误。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change someday because as as we are getting older the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not mature as I was young.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change someday because as we are getting older, the source can make me manage some changes and I'm not as mature as I was when I was young.

'as I was young'缺少介词'when'，应为'when I was young'，这是介词使用错误。

× The type of writing I prefer is typing because it is convenient to me and I can check what I write at any time and anywhere because I have my cell phone.

✓ The type of writing I prefer is typing because it is convenient for me and I can check what I write at any time and anywhere because I have my cell phone.

'convenient to me'应为'convenient for me'，介词使用错误。