Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I don't write very often. Usually, I only write when I have to do school assignments. I prefer speaking because it's easier for me to express my feelings that way.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để giải thích lý do bạn thích viết về giấc mơ.

例: I like writing about my dreams because they often reflect my real-life experiences. This helps me understand myself better and remember interesting moments.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc. Hãy thêm ví dụ hoặc giải thích cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

例: Yes, I think my writing will change as I learn more. For example, my ideas and style will improve, and I will use better words to express myself.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác, ví dụ như 'information' không có số nhiều. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn.

例: I prefer handwriting over typing when I want to memorize information because writing by hand helps me remember better. For instance, when I take notes during lectures, I can focus more and retain the material longer.

× Most of time I would rephrase speaking because it's very convenient to express my emotion.

✓ Most of the time I would rephrase speaking because it's very convenient to express my emotion.

The phrase 'Most of time' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct expression is 'Most of the time' to indicate a general frequency. Adding 'the' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× I really enjoyed writings about my dreams because sometimes these activities in my dreams are similar to what I do in real life.

✓ I really enjoy writing about my dreams because sometimes the activities in my dreams are similar to what I do in real life.

The word 'writings' is a plural noun but here the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund 'writing' to indicate the activity. Also, 'enjoyed' is past tense but the context suggests a general statement, so present tense 'enjoy' is more appropriate.

× I think this dream attractive, so I decided to take notice a good experience.

✓ I think this dream is attractive, so I decided to take note of a good experience.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. Also, the phrase 'take notice a good experience' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take note of a good experience' meaning to pay attention to it.

× My writing style and idea tend to be evolved and other words I can change. I need to change my.

✓ My writing style and ideas tend to evolve, and in other words, I can change. I need to change mine.

'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match 'style'. 'Tend to be evolved' is incorrect; the correct form is 'tend to evolve' (present tense). The phrase 'other words I can change' is unclear and should be 'in other words, I can change'. The last sentence is incomplete; 'my' should be 'mine' to refer to 'my writing style and ideas'.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing when I need to memorize informations because writing my hand helped me remember things more effectively.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing when I need to memorize information because writing by hand helps me remember things more effectively.

'Informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'writing my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'writing by hand'. The verb tense is adjusted to present tense 'helps' to match the general statement.

× For example, when I take note during letters, I find as physically writings help me focus better and retain the material.

✓ For example, when I take notes during lectures, I find that physically writing helps me focus better and retain the material.

'Take note' should be plural 'take notes' to indicate multiple notes. 'During letters' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'lectures'. 'I find as physically writings' is incorrect; it should be 'I find that physically writing'. 'Writings' should be 'writing' (gerund) here.