Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和不完整的句子，且注意句子之间的衔接。可以简洁明了地表达观点，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I write quite a lot recently because I am preparing for my writing tests, so I practice every day. Besides that, I usually write in my diary to record my thoughts and future expectations. I find that writing helps me improve my skills.

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和多余的词汇，使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以更具体地描述写作内容。

例: I enjoy writing in my diary because it helps me record my daily thoughts and memorable events. Sometimes, I also like to create short stories based on my imagination, which allows me to express my creativity and relax.

提案: 回答应避免句子不完整，且内容应更具体完整。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe the things I write will definitely change over time. For example, when I was a teenager, I often wrote about romantic relationships or gossip. But now, I tend to focus more on professional topics or personal development.

提案: 回答较好，但可以避免重复词汇，使用更丰富的连接词使表达更自然。

例: Nowadays, I prefer typing on the computer because it is easier, more efficient, and convenient. For example, when I write essays or emails, I can easily edit my work without starting over, which saves time and energy. Also, my handwriting is not very neat.

× Yes, I've been writing a lot recently because I'm making preparations for my writing tests so I practice a lot every day Besides all that, I usually would write in Diaries to record my thoughts and expectations for the future.

✓ Yes, I've been writing a lot recently because I'm making preparations for my writing tests, so I practice a lot every day. Besides all that, I usually write in diaries to record my thoughts and expectations for the future.

原句中缺少标点符号，导致句子结构混乱，应在两个独立句子之间加逗号和句号。此外，'would write'用法不当，表达习惯动作时应使用一般现在时'write'。'Diaries'不需要大写。

× Besides all that, I usually would write in Diaries to record my thoughts and expectations for the future.

✓ Besides all that, I usually write in diaries to record my thoughts and expectations for the future.

'Diaries'作为复数名词，不需要大写，也不需要定冠词'the'，应使用小写形式。

× I find writing improves my.

✓ I find writing improves me.

原句缺少宾语，导致句子不完整，应补充宾语使句子完整。

× What Sometimes I also like to create short stories based on my imagination, which allows me to express my creativity and relax.

✓ Sometimes I also like to create short stories based on my imagination, which allows me to express my creativity and relax.

句首多余的'What'导致句子结构错误，应删除。

× Yes, I believe the things I write will definitely change over time.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write will definitely change over time.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, when I was a teenager, I usually wrote about romantic relationships with my classmates or gossips or some notes of encouragement to motivate myself.

✓ For example, when I was a teenager, I usually wrote about romantic relationships with my classmates, gossip, or some notes of encouragement to motivate myself.

'gossips'作为不可数名词应使用单数形式'gossip'，并且列举时应使用逗号分隔。

× But now I tend to focus on more professional topics or personal.

✓ But now I tend to focus on more professional topics or personal ones.

'personal'后缺少名词或代词，导致句子不完整，应补充'ones'以指代前文提到的'topics'。

× Well, nowadays I prefer typing on the computer because I find it much easier and efficient and convenient.

✓ Well, nowadays I prefer typing on the computer because I find it much easier, more efficient, and more convenient.

形容词并列时应保持结构一致，使用比较级形式并用逗号分隔。

× For example, when I write ICS or emails I can easily edit my work without having to start over, which saves me a lot of time and energy.

✓ For example, when I write SMS or emails, I can easily edit my work without having to start over, which saves me a lot of time and energy.

'ICS'应为'SMS'（短信）或其他正确缩写，且句中缺少逗号分隔。

× And additionally my handwriting is not that good looking.

✓ Additionally, my handwriting is not that good looking.

句首不应同时使用'And'和'additionally'，应选择其一，且'additionally'后应加逗号。