Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
No, I don't write a lot. Because when I when I starts writing, I find it's very difficult to express myself with the right and correct words. So I don't have the habit of writing, but I I want to. I want to have.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I like to write my daily lives. For example several days ago I start to writing diary every day, even several sentences a day. I think it can re record my daily lives.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, I think the things I write will change someday because you know everything would change with the time pass by. For example, umm, sometimes I write umm, the failing, the failing and and after a long time.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
When I am writing I prefer typing on the computer because now I don't keep paper diary. Instead I I write him diary on my computer and even with a cloud note so I can.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 60.0提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复。可以尝试用更自然的句子结构，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
例: No, I don't write a lot because I find it difficult to express myself with the right words. However, I want to develop the habit of writing more often.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: I like to write about my daily life. For example, I started keeping a diary a few days ago, writing even just a few sentences each day because it helps me record my experiences.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有重复，建议用更具体的例子和清晰的句子表达观点，避免口头语和重复。
例: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time because everything changes. For example, my feelings and opinions may be different when I look back after a long time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并且避免重复。可以增加一些原因使回答更丰富。
例: I prefer typing on the computer because I no longer keep a paper diary. Instead, I write my diary on the computer and use cloud notes so I can access it anywhere.
文法
× Because when I when I starts writing, I find it's very difficult to express myself with the right and correct words.
✓ Because when I start writing, I find it's very difficult to express myself with the right and correct words.
主语是第一人称单数“I”，动词应使用原形“start”，而不是第三人称单数形式“starts”。
× For example several days ago I start to writing diary every day, even several sentences a day.
✓ For example, several days ago I started writing a diary every day, even several sentences a day.
动词“start”后接动名词形式“writing”，而不是不定式“to writing”。另外，时间状语“several days ago”表示过去，动词应使用过去式“started”。
× I like to write my daily lives.
✓ I like to write about my daily life.
“daily life”是不可数名词，表示日常生活，不能用复数形式“daily lives”。
× I think it can re record my daily lives.
✓ I think it can record my daily life.
同上，“daily life”应为单数不可数形式，且“re record”应为“record”。
× I start to writing diary every day, even several sentences a day.
✓ I started writing a diary every day, even several sentences a day.
时间状语“several days ago”表示过去，动词应使用过去式“started”。
× I start to writing diary every day, even several sentences a day.
✓ I started writing a diary every day, even several sentences a day.
动词“start”后应接动名词“writing”，而不是不定式“to writing”。
× Instead I I write him diary on my computer and even with a cloud note so I can.
✓ Instead, I write my diary on my computer and even use a cloud note so I can.
“him diary”错误，应该是“my diary”，表示“我的日记”。
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