Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to give a direct response and add specific details without repeating the same words. Use simple linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I write a lot because it helps me express my thoughts. For example, I enjoy writing poems and short stories in my free time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas.

例: I like to write poems because they allow me to express my feelings. For instance, I often write about happy moments or personal experiences.

提案: Your answer is vague and lacks detail. Try to give a direct opinion and explain your reasoning clearly. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to support your answer.

例: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because my thoughts and experiences will develop as I grow.

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer structure. Provide reasons for your preference and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer typing more than handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient. However, I also enjoy handwriting when I want to feel more connected to my writing.

× I like poem and like poem.

✓ I like poems.

The word 'poem' is countable and should be pluralized to 'poems' when referring to more than one. Using the singular form here is incorrect because the student is expressing a general liking for poems in plural.

× Write write writing too.

✓ I also like writing.

The phrase 'Write write writing too' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct form uses the gerund 'writing' to express the activity the student likes. Repetition of 'write' is incorrect and should be removed.

× I like write poem because I like poem and like write poem.

✓ I like writing poems because I like poems and like writing poems.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'writing'. Also, 'poem' should be plural 'poems' to indicate general preference. The original sentence incorrectly uses the base form 'write'.

× I like poem and like write poem.

✓ I like poems and like writing poems.

Same as above, 'poem' should be plural 'poems' and 'write' should be 'writing' to correctly express liking for the activity and the object.

× I like write my feelings best feeling or good feeling everything.

✓ I like to write about my feelings, especially the best or good feelings, and everything else.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Like write' should be 'like to write' or 'like writing'. The phrase 'best feeling or good feeling everything' is confusing and needs restructuring for clarity.

× maybe it would change because I can.

✓ Maybe it will change because I can.

The modal verb 'would' is used for hypothetical or conditional situations. Here, 'will' is more appropriate to express a possible future change. 'Because I can' is acceptable but could be clearer.

× I like typing and handwriting posts like, but typing is more than handwriting.

✓ I like typing and handwriting, but I prefer typing more than handwriting.

The phrase 'handwriting posts like' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Handwriting' is uncountable here and should not be followed by 'posts like'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.